‘When’

The knowing of answered prayers🌹

‘When’

When I find you
Having found
Me-
I know I’ll
Be totally
Free-

I’ll love you
Like the rising
Sun softly
Shines
On each drop
Of morning
Dew-
A love so
Pure and true
Only magic
Could cast
A spell-
Removing
The vail of
Prevailing
Doom -
In my heart
There’ll
Be no room
For lack
Or lust-
But
Endless trust
Will rule-

All doubt
Our love will
Remove -
And rainbows
And stars
Collide-
And loving
Memories
Will reside-

A love so pure
And true-
Shared by
Me and you-
Where kisses
Fall and
Freedom calls-
The intimate
Places touch-
No longing will
Be too much -

Where worlds collide
And butterflies
The pollen spreads
Like wings-
Deeper intimacy
And new things

The heavens
Will hear
When I hold you
Near-
My heartbeat
Disappears-
My breath
My vision
Hazes -
My voice
It mumbles
Tasting -

The crystal clarity
Of care -
We feel it
Everywhere-
The wishes once
We wished-

My senses heightened
Gladly inviting-
Each unknown
Urge and call-

That’s how my
Heart
Will fall-

True love
Complete-
When lovers
Greet -
True bliss
Never known
Before.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
25 February 2018

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful ride in your tempting and wonderful words. Your words like a Donne's poem. Make you wish and want to know this place.
Where worlds collide
"And butterflies
The pollen spreads
Like wings-
Deeper intimacy
And new things"
I did liked the above lines. If two people seeking same place connect. A volcano of bliss and joy would overtake their world. Could be scary. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

If you never take s chance you will never know- face the fear and do it anyway..what wonderful words-a volcano of bliss and joy - I’d like to be the cause of that eruption- Thankyou for understanding🌹

[Richard🖌]

Goodness, Kelly!
You've certainly been composing some beautifully soul warming verse of late … it feels a bit like you're falling in-love, and what could be better than that for a warm, lovely enchantress like you … I do not know, 'cause it seems such a perfect fit.
Your tender poetic voice is soft and willing, even embracing in its touch … one can virtually feel you radiating affection.

Ahhh, such is the excellence of a skillful pen that it pulls your readers into your moment with you, and how sweet it is … big thank you hugs, Dear Poetess✨ ⁓ Richard

[I was thinking how effective it would be to see your always splendid picture choices displayed full size above your poems … just sharing a lovely thought] : )

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Well it is not a sin to win the heart of your own and let the love embrace and taste the truth in time... always in love..,waiting for the love to choose it’s rest...I’ll take your advice for the picture, Thankyou for your time🌹

[Richard🖌]

You're most welcome, Kelly.

[UN]

I like your creative use of short lines, and the feelings it evokes of happiness with a loved one! Well done

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I appreciate your time and review🌹

[Chris]

Some of the repetition reminded me of lyrics and the form seemed Spoken Word with the rhythmic tonals - I wonder the accent you must have... and how it would fill the word choices. I look forward to listening to your next piece.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your time the voice is in the hearing🌹

[Chris]

Here - at this moment - it is early morn and quite the coffee - time. We each have an inner voice we hear our words spoken through as we present them to our world... and our tones are indeed regional whether known or not.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Silence speaks wonders enjoy the coffee/ go easy on the sugar🌹

[Chris]

I prefer it dark and strong...

[Nipplegrinder]

So gently romantic and hopeful. Well done.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your time🌹

[Mary]

This poem is stunningly beautiful, in word choice, heart, soul, rhythm. Every thing about it eminates beauty and love and all that's right.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I appreciate your time thankyou🌹

[wordman]

sounds like a beautiful relationship

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

It will be once it is🌹

[wordman]

i hope so,and i really do

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I appreciate it.. yes we all hope that one day we’ll have a love like this .. I believe 🌹

[sette]

A love so
Pure and true
Only magic
Could cast i like this stanza very romantic and i am now entertained by the idea of true love. again kelly, this is nice writing.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I’m so glad for whatever good you may take from it, many thanks 🌹