‘When’

The knowing of answered prayers🌹

‘When’

When I find you
Having found
Me-
I know I’ll
Be totally
Free-

I’ll love you
Like the rising
Sun softly
Shines
On each drop
Of morning
Dew-
A love so
Pure and true
Only magic
Could cast
A spell-
Removing
The vail of
Prevailing
Doom -
In my heart
There’ll
Be no room
For lack
Or lust-
But
Endless trust
Will rule-

All doubt
Our love will
Remove -
And rainbows
And stars
Collide-
And loving
Memories
Will reside-

A love so pure
And true-
Shared by
Me and you-
Where kisses
Fall and
Freedom calls-
The intimate
Places touch-
No longing will
Be too much -

Where worlds collide
And butterflies
The pollen spreads
Like wings-
Deeper intimacy
And new things

The heavens
Will hear
When I hold you
Near-
My heartbeat
Disappears-
My breath
My vision
Hazes -
My voice
It mumbles
Tasting -

The crystal clarity
Of care -
We feel it
Everywhere-
The wishes once
We wished-

My senses heightened
Gladly inviting-
Each unknown
Urge and call-

That’s how my
Heart
Will fall-

True love
Complete-
When lovers
Greet -
True bliss
Never known
Before.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
25 February 2018

Reviews

[SleeplessVolcano]

I like the positivity in this.....often people become negative about delays in finding love and try some painful shortcuts....having faith surely helps! :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Without we have nothing sometimes we think it’s just a dream but I have seen many times that if u have faith and believe your hopes prayers and desires do materialise therefore why should live be any different- never give up 🌹many thanks I appreciate your time and thoughts🌹

[mou]

a love so pure..a heart so pure! lovely formation of feelings as it goes on.
mou.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I really appreciate you taking time 🌹

[KCthelastboyscout]

Your heart is full of faith and it shines through reading this poem.true romantic

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I appreciate your words- yes I walk each day in faith and I know God will bring my love of my love to me at the right time- true love- He knows my heart and I trust Him he’s never failed me before and He won’t start now- Thankyou again for your time🌹

[Einstein Noodle]

mmmmmmmmmmmmm true love....snaps my jaded old self to attention Ms.In Time ;) the wisdom in the opening lines:
"When I find you
Having found
Me- " ...hooked me...i thought ..ok this is a non-fanciful take on love ...and the trust trust trust you emphasize is undeniably necessary says i! unfortunately not many of us have such a strong state of mind to wait ...those passions in youth too eager.....too adventurous ... and these days too encouraged to "experiment" ... well said ... not sappy ... nice one .. my hopes and spirit are lifted this morning to believe in Love ;) thanks for sharing
E.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Only a pleasure and to find new hope in love is something we all need to do- trust is a big challenge for most myself included but when you trust in the unknown and the know thenhopefully the test will be just about complete? I wait upon the trusted time of each chapter in life happening at the right time place and season 🌹many thanks for popping by🌹

[Einstein Noodle]

:)........................

[Kelly Scheppers]

I'm a hopeless romantic. Always have been, always will be. This is right in my wheelhouse, Kelly.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Many thanks for your time🌹

[Ghost]

I hope that you have this love and that there is someone to receive this love..

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Somewhere out there beneath the sky so blue.. Thanku I appreciate your kind words🌹

[Dave]

Such a beautiful invitation to expectant love. The passion you promise to the one
you are waiting for. The desire for your shared love to be never ending. I'm sure
you strike a chord with all seeking that "one" to share their love with. Very nicely
done.

Take care - Dave

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Many thanks-yes the promises of true love are endless and it flows from one bow to another- where to be ‘in love’ is not ‘to love’- it’s so much more🌹

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a sweetly romantic love poem. Lydi**

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for kind wirds🌹

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

‘Words’🌹spelling???

[Lydia Shutter]

LOL No problem.

[Ghania]

This is such a sweet piece of true, and pure love. Beautifully penned. Loved it

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your time I appreciate your visit🌹

[Ghania]

You're welcome.