‘I Know-Do You’

‘I Know-Do You’

A Poem by ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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Loves secrets so deep🌹

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I Know-Do You?

If only you knew-
I love you
I do-
What would
You do-

Would you open
Your heart
Embrace your
Part-

Would you turn
And hide
From the emotions
Inside-

What would you do
Would you love me true-

Would it be a unity
Of me and you-
No matter how blue
The days up ahead
Wouldn’t control
The heart or the
Soul-

Would your love
Be so pure-
So precious
And true-
Where all the words
You never let through
Come tumbling out
From the deepest
Part of you-

Is that what you’d
Do-
If only you knew?

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
13 February 2018

© 2018 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹


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Secret love. Will break our heart one day. The regret of not knowing the beginning leave the heart to mourn.
"Is that what you’d
Do-
If only you knew? "
I loved the above lines dear Poet. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

I want to know each part of love and touch each emotion that lies within it, sometimes there isn’t.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I agree dear Poet. Love is a wonderland if we want.
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Winter wonderland where black ice turns white🌹



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Secret love. Will break our heart one day. The regret of not knowing the beginning leave the heart to mourn.
"Is that what you’d
Do-
If only you knew? "
I loved the above lines dear Poet. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

I want to know each part of love and touch each emotion that lies within it, sometimes there isn’t.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I agree dear Poet. Love is a wonderland if we want.
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Winter wonderland where black ice turns white🌹
' Would your love - Be so pure- So precious - And true- Where all the words - You never let through - Come tumbling out - From the deepest - Part of you.. .. '

Seems decision time, when thoughts just mightt become actions. Or, should they? Your words, though clearly put are almost shadowed by doubt.Those quetions, that wondering.. should it..? could it..? -
what if? ' Maybe sometimes courage waits its turn.. and waits.. and waits.. then, can be, could be too late. What then/ Time to ... what?

Great write, cleverly writ, finely laid... sensitive, real.

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Thankyou for your thoughts, loving your words as well, I just don’t have much time to review all t.. read more
emmajoy

6 Years Ago

You're very welcome... and do understand how time eats into life.. darn it!. Be happy..
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Your a shining star tat doesn’t need to be seen to be appreciated, blessings🌹
I can strongly relate to the emotions conveyed in this poem, thanks for sharing another great writing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Thankyou I appreciate it, yes our emotions need to exposed sometimes for true love to surface🌹

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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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Essex, United Kingdom



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