Beauty Inside

Beauty so much deeper than the eye sees.

Beauty Inside:

True beauty
You are-
Serene
First only
Green-
Then as if
In a dream
Your colour
Unfolds-
Life’s story
Untold-

Yellow
Oh so mellow-
Searching for the
Suns light-
Your life has
Yet begun-

Through the process
You’ll grow less
And
Express more-
True beauty
That we are all
Looking for-
The more you open
The power becomes
Potent-
Hypnotising and
Mesmorizing-

Your petals so
Complete-
Nothing can compete
With the beauty
Found inside-
Just let go
And let yourself
Grow-
Otherwise
You’ll just
Never
Know...

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Just let go
And let yourself
Grow-
Otherwise
You’ll just
Never
Know... "
What a true message you share with us. We all go through life trying to control this and that, carrying heavy weights of this and that, trying to change others before oursleves in futility but to find out we have to chill. let go and search ourselves first for truth. Truth will become a good power when we grasp it.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Let go and let God, do your best and let Hod do the rest, Thankyou for your time🌹

[Sami Khalil]

I do agree. The weight lifted will be enormous. He is in control indeed.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Amen He is a wonder working God🌹

[Sami Khalil]

:)...................

[Gee]

That is the beauty that we only find when taking the time to truly know a person.My long suffering wife is the mos wonderful person with a beautiful soul. Enjoyed the early morning read. I was gonna refer to you, as I do with others, by your monikas initials. Hmmmm

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes beauty is what makes the heart of the soul,Thankyou for your time I appreciate it🌹

[Gee]

My pleasure

[Coyote Poetry]

Take no chances. Know no love or the possibilities of laughter and fun. We need to know Hypnotising and
Mesmorizing- . These are the moments where people celebrate life and living. Thank you dear Poet for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

If there’s no broken boundaries of love love cannot prosper, mad uncontrollable love quenches the fire within🌹

[Bare trees]

No matter how pretty a woman is, I learned that it's the inside that counts. The same with men too. When they speak, the story of who they are inside will unfold.

Not a critique or correction, just wondering what first only green means. Also, Your petals so Compete-
Nothing can compete

petals complete?

I like this poem.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for you time and comment, I have corrected-green refers to the flower before it opens, its s 🌼 daffodil and when they are closed they are green but I’m glad you saw other aspects within the poem and yes I had this discussion today that we cannot judge by the cover as we can be fooled..thankyou🌹