I really agree with your analysis of the word sorry and the idea of apology in general. I really enjoy the phrasing of the second-to-last verse, a clever poem that makes no time for remorse or apology.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
I’m glad you see my point sorry is such an unnecessary state to be in. It’s all in our choices w.. read moreI’m glad you see my point sorry is such an unnecessary state to be in. It’s all in our choices we make, glad you enjoyed it thankyou for taking time to review🌹
The below words are true.
"Drowning
In your
Sorrows,
As if
There's no
Tomorrow,
Is where you
Go,
When that
'Sorry'
Does not
Let you
Go..."
I did things I could not forgive myself. Love demand payment. I learn later in life. Every gift of love was a wonderful gift. I do believe in Karma. I pay for 10 year in triples for my my deeds and actions. Thank you dear Poet for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
You are forgiven as long as u surrender all, then you are free, don’t hold yourself captive just b.. read moreYou are forgiven as long as u surrender all, then you are free, don’t hold yourself captive just be free🌹
6 Years Ago
Hard to do dear Kelly. But we must.
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