The Wind

Listen to the wind it talks

The wind it blows
It holds your name-
The sun it shines
Your smile so bright-
The rain it falls
Your laughter echos-
The snow it forms
Your heart it warms-

Your memories
Will linger on-
Never to be forgotten
For the hearts you
Touched-
Remain loved
And cherished-
And the rainbow
You created by
Bringing people
Together-
Will be something that
Will live on forever.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

The wind it does indeed talk. In fact it chatters away and has many moods. Sometimes a whisper, sometimes a roar. Your poem is a beautiful tribute for someone who is lost to you at such a young age. Life is so fragile and yet we do not always understand that. May she RIP.

Chris

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou and yes ever so sad - shell always be remembered in this small town😇

[Neville]

I often listen to the wind.. it often makes more sense to me than a lot of other things a great little poem carried on the breeze.... N

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes for those who can hear much can be heard- thanking you🌹

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Sad that she was so uoung and committed suicide😢

[Neville]

sometimes I am a complete idiot.. I did not pick up on that... I am so very sorry. Neville

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

No u arent- all is well-🌹

[Neville]

you are very kind, but my apology still stands.. N

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and hopeful words. Memories and places/faces make us know we had lived and we had learn. The poem had the feel of a gentle wind whispering to us. We shall be okay. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

We will be just fine-so close yet so far🌹

[G.W. Saitreux]

I quite enjoyed this writing. It is very beautiful and conveys a strong sense of purpose and meaning. I definitely get feel-good vibes from this piece all the way through reading it. This poem was certainly a pleasure to read, thanks for sharing!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I’m glad you enjoyed it thanku🌹

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

This is a very special poem.. I wrote it for a 15 yr old girl, Holly, after she took her own life in November 2017, her beauty lives on in the song of the winds🌹