I Walked A While

Loves reelection on the sands of the tide

'I Walked A While'

I walked a
While
On the seaside
With you-
The sea so
Blue-
With love
So true-
I watched
The waves
And how the
Birds flew-
And there
I fell in love
With you-

We walked and
Talked and
Forgot what
We knew-
I walked a while
On the seaside
With you-

We felt the
Seasand
Between our
Toes-
The cold air
Blowing
Against our
Nose-
The sand
So wet-
The water so
Cold-
And each thinking
Thoughts that
Remain untold-

I walked a while
On the seaside
With you-
And all the
Time
You knew
And
I did too.

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'I Walked a while'
Thoughts in time,
Moments spent in special occasion as even ocean, sky and love all become one. Steps taken together simply testify; "We are together." It is enough. This writing brought to light for me the importance of knowing what is really important. special occasions can be small excursions, a conversation and the like.
Kathy

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

In all the small moments it's found 🌹🌹

[Neville]

this is so very thoughts in time... and so very much enjoyed...

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou- i love this one and has a very special meaninv behind it-special moments🌹

[Neville]

that is the impression I got... :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

[Neville]

either that was one hell of a party, or you got lost on the way back to me ................ nevertheless, I thank you regardless🌹x

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

A time and place dear sir....always close at heart 🌹

[Neville]

How very kind of you T in T 😎👍🍷cheers :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful. You create beautiful place and perfect situation. When we are with someone special near the sea. A perfect day. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry. I love the sea.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Water puts out my fire and calms the soul, that perfect peace of two in harmony joined as one reflecting each others love...you are welcome🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome also dear Poet. I love your work.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹To touch another’s soul is freedom🦋

[lessa (kenzie)]

This is every so soft and lovely, very nicely written

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

THankyou so much for your time 🌹

[sette]

such a sweet and romantic poem, i appreciate the metaphors used in the poem and even the rhyming of words, keep on writing good work

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Many thanks for your kindness❤️