Seashells

The tides of time revealing what’s hidden in the mind.

SEASHELLS:

The seashells
Tell
A tale
Of the lovers
On
The shore
Where many
Have been
Before-
The laughter
And
Happiness
Only
For the to keep
Which so many
Others
Do seek-

The soft
Breeze showing
The heart
Which
Way to
Go-
While
Deep inside
One
Doth know-
Sometimes
Hard to
Let it
Show-

The seagulls
Call out -
Removing
All doubt
With a freedom
To the
Love-
As they
Look down
From
Above-

The sand
So coarse-
Reminds
Them of
The path
Ahead-
Not all
Complete glory-
Yet it will
Create the
Story -
Taking them
Back to
The waves-
Where the
Lovers
Ride on
The tide-
Hoping to
Have
Time on
Their
Side...

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Seashells'
Thoughts in Time,
I like going to the beach. Walking along the sand it is a great place to just ponder and think. It is also a beautiful place and that in itself brings relaxation. I think many find it so intricate and it just brings an attitude of creativity and imagination. Your above poem shows this. You bring in the ocean and beach as the foundation for two sweethearts walking together and maybe planning their future together in conversation. Lovely work.
Blessings,
Kathy

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Oh Thankyou -I love this poem it was written with special emotions upon my heart...yes I love the beach and the sea ...a special place and being an empath we crave water...hope you are well...love and blessings🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem. The sea does know and keep secrets. The sea and the beach. Perfect place to be alive, free and wild. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for taking time and appreciation will be returned, along with much blessings🦋

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome dear Poet.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

[Brittany Zedalis]

There is an episode of the show Black Mirror (on Netflix) titled San Junipero, and this poem made me think of that. It's my favorite episode because of the love story, and I love that what you wrote brought it to mind. Very, very nice piece. ^-^

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou so might for your insight and taking time to read, I try express my emotions and how I see through my heart❤️

[G.W. Saitreux]

I really enjoyed this piece, it flows well and it conveys the feelings in a very precise manner.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Merci🌹thanking u🦋