The night
Is calling
Me
Out yonder
From behind
The
Clouds amongst
The stars-
The shining
Puffs of
Angels
Breath
And
Sleepy
Slumber
Where hearts
Do
Wonder-
I dream
Of you
Out among
The
Forest dew,
The dawn
Comes
Calling
Where has
My
Heart fallen?
In amongst
The dandelions
And
Daffodils
My
Love
Its calling-
'Wait for me'
' Don't disappear',
'There's far too
Much to
Learn,'
The water
Ripples
Over
Stones in
Streams,
The love
It fulls
My dreams,
In silent
Brooks,
Every cranny
And ever
Crook,
Colours burst,
Forth
In thirst,
The
Morning song
Is heard,
The silence,
In the words-
'Return to me,
Let our
Love
Ride on
The sea,
The waves
Of time
Washing
Over
Our
Minds,
Our hearts
Entwined-'
A call for the return of a much missed lover perhaps? Some beautiful imagery in your lines and so much longing Kelly. I hope your dreams are fulfilled. What will be will be. All good wishes.
Chris
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Thankyou and my wishes too when it’s meant to be it will be- blessingsx🌹
5 Years Ago
A good attitude to have. Patience is a virtue Kelly x
An empassioned poem filled with grace and lace and fantasy like grace. It flows like sweat down the back of a lover in rivulets of salty sensuality. A couple of typos me thinks:
3rd stanza
'The love
It fulls
My dreams,'
fills perhaps?
also
'Every cranny
And ever
Crook,'
every perhaps?
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Thankyou so much for your words and correction- yes it was a calling to a lover out yonder 🌹
5 Years Ago
Ah out yonder waits a lover who will fill you with passion and fates wings!
I love the title... I almost bought an old cottage once called 'Over Yonder'.. and the body of your poem certainly made me both think and smile... see.. some of us blokes can multi task..... Neville
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
Oh how wonderful that cottage must have been- can only wish and hope- who knows what waits over yond.. read moreOh how wonderful that cottage must have been- can only wish and hope- who knows what waits over yonder-well done dear sir🌹
5 Years Ago
indeed.. we none of us know..... maybe that's why we write.... and live in hope... N
'Out Yonder'
Thoughts in Time,
This is a sweet poem of hope as it sings it's way through the waters and rills being cleansed by the sun. I see you going through a process of pondering and coming to a decision to let go of fear and to give yourself permission to begin again. Beautiful lyrical song type of writing.
Blessings,
Kathy
Posted 6 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Thankyou for your thoughts- love is always waiting just who knows where-blessings🌹
5 Years Ago
Out of sight and out of mind..what one might never dream of or expect..
You are right. Love is never blind.
"In amongst
The dandelions
And
Daffodils
My
Love
Its calling-
'Wait for me'
' Don't disappear',
'There's far too
Much to
Learn,' "
The above lines are wishes and hope. Fast life make us forget. We are empty without love. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote
Yes I agree never stop learning searching finding, my pleasure🌹
6 Years Ago
This is one of my favourites- it was early hours of the morning I was sleeping up in the loft when s.. read moreThis is one of my favourites- it was early hours of the morning I was sleeping up in the loft when staying at my sister, it was summer here and the moon was still out the dawn was breaking I saw the moon I stood at the window I heard the first sounds of birds awakening and I listened deeper and I escaped on a journey....such beauty of nature calls to teach us🌹