enigma

enigma

A Poem by kar


betrayal and infidelities

secrets and shame

pressures to create

unwanted without a name

a problem and a solution

the two are the same

one will rejoice

another fades away

questions have no answers

reflecting mirrors void

a face without a name

a name without a face

© 2014 kar


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Great use of the language. You create thoughts and questions with the poem. You are a talented writers. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


kar

10 Years Ago

ah, thank you once again, my friend. your words inspire me!
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.
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kar
Wow! I believe you have made my day; thank you so much! I appreciate your kind comments as they help keep me inspired on a bleak day indeed!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Oooh! I like the word flow in this and the way the opposite energies play against eachother. It's the type of poem that make one stop and muse about existence and actions or lack there of. It makes one want to look in the mirror with every action to see what would happen to the reverse... Lots of endless probabilities painted well within your words.

Great Ink!
Wolfwind

Posted 10 Years Ago



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