Non Sum

Non Sum

A Poem by kar


you were the brightest light
on my darkest of nights.
your voice, the sweetest sound;
your allure quite profound.
 
my favorite lover you quickly became;
for you i would do anything  - i had no shame.
i wanted you close, needed you near;
i longed for that pinch from your sharp,  piercing spear.
 
as my blood rushes, you dance in my mind;
you send me spinning, no words can define.
slowly, as your dance begins to end;
my thoughts about life start to transcend.
 
when it's all said and done,
you leave me, feeling cumbersome.
my body aches, and my mind reels;
frantically seeking the next perfect deal.
 
as daylight fades, giving way to night,
i'm left alone to fight this miserable fight.
existing, full of remorse;
oh how i despise you, you evil horse!
 

© 2014 kar


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"my favorite lover you quickly became;
for you i would do anything - i had no shame."
You are a amazing writer. You make the words have life and purpose. This poem came alive and create wild visions. The above lines were my favorite. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


kar

10 Years Ago

thank you so much! i appreciate your kind words. this piece has personal meaning to me, i'm thrilled.. read more

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