Hopefully Powerless

When the heart begins to chip, before the crack, before the break

My heart is in your hands
I know not your plans
Heal me, I scarcely can stand
Without you, without you
I am but half a man

If you go, place me in a desert
My tears turn the ground pleasant
And beneath me forms an oasis
Leave me with dreams of our genesis
That way I may find the shadow of peace

I am the earth and you are the moon,
drifting away to be gone one day soon
In my future nothing but despair looms
Without you the silence is a sonic boom
Come back, come back, I'd rather play the fool

If you have to go, let me make a request
I hope reality is a cycle of life and death
In case we are here again, I'll make you a bet
I'll get it right, I promise don't you fret
For if eternity is our future, then nothing is set

Author's Note

I'll appreciate your candid reviews. Wrote this straight from the heart

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

Heartfelt and far-sighted plea; portraying just the right amount of drama.
A strong, eloquent offering!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Awesome!!!!
amazing flow and rhyme.....
clever beautiful writing.....
i loved it!!!
:)

[KelWriter]

Thanks Pushkar! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it as I did writing it :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

i sure did!!! you are welcome!!! :) :)

[Jamestown]

Great piece of work, truly enjoyed reading this! Well written and great delivery
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[KelWriter]

Thanks a bunch for the review Jamestown and amen to that!