Blank

A blank eye
A blank soul
A blank future to behold

A blank smile
A blank soul
A Blank future to behold

A blank hug
A blank soul
A blank future to behold

A blank word
A blank sould
A blank future to behold

A blank mind
A blank soul
A blank future to behold

All filled with
A false happiness
A false pride
A false soul
A false future to behold

Reviews

[poetic soul]

this is so dark and disillusioned!!!
loved the repetition of "blank" thru out the poem...
it made it come alive...
brilliant work!!
i can connect to this one....had a phase like this in life...
i hope its a jus a phase for you too...

:) Love,
Krishna