Cry

Sometimes when i'm alone I cry.

Because I am on my own.

The tears I cry are bitter and warm.

They flow with life but take no form.

I cry because my heart is torn.

I find it difficult to carry on.

If I had an ear to confiding,

I would cry among my treasured friend.

But who do you know that stops that long to help another carry on.

The world moves fast and would rather pass by,

Than to stop and see what makes one cry.

So painful and sad.

sometimes I cry And no one cares about why.

Reviews

[KlineXcreed]

I really like this piece, it's simple and to the point. It shares a fundamental aspect into every lonely persons heart. As a younger child I dealt with a lot of loneliness so this really speaks to me.
"I cry because my heart is torn.
I find it difficult to carry on."
I think this is very sweet! Thanks for posting!

[K.M.W.]

I was 18 years old.9/11 incident just happened. Ex fiance worked there. The out come was she was o.k,never went to work that day from having the flu or common cold. I was going through one of those lonely moments in my life. The parts that really spoke to me while writing it and still do are "The tears i cry are bitter and warm.
They flow with life but take no form"
"The world moves fast and would rather pass by,
Than to stop and see what makes one cry .

Your welcome for posting this, it was my pleasure and thank you for the amazing review. :)