My Ms. Universe

With the rays of the sun I'll make her crown
With the fabric of space I'll make her gown
With the rings of Saturn I'll make her throne
With the universe for her stage may her reign last forever
Long live the queen

Written by Keith Edward Baucum

Reviews

[Moonie]

I got a game of thrones image in my mind for some reason...lol...all in all a good write! Well done! :)

[AYVID N]

A very thinking poem on how to treat a woman one loves. Every woman dreams of such a love. I am so happy to read this.

[KeithEBaucum]

Thank you.

[Songmaker]

I absolutely love this! This speaks straight from the heart of how real people should be treated. If we all treated each other like this maybe there wouldn't be so much fighting! Great read. Truelly impressed how you made things all fit together.

[KeithEBaucum]

Thank you.