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Take a trip with me to lands unheard of Through hidden passed, secret doors, and unknown chambers deep within my mind All you need is your imagination so leave everything behind

Take a trip with me to lands unheard of
Through hidden passages, secret doors, and unknown chambers deep within my mind
All you need is your imagination so leave everything behind
See creatures and sights so strange that they'll burn imprints on the pages of your brain

Written by Keith Edward Baucum

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[V]

I think there's a lot of potential in your words but it could use a tad more structuring. A good structure, lay out, it gives a writing a new perception and guides the reader. But I like your choice of words and the theme.

[KeithEBaucum]

Thank you.

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