Black Woman

She captured me in her sexiness with her gravitational pull
Her gravitational pull tugs at my essences
The heat she emit would make Satan sweat
Her earth tone skin have men erupting like volcanoes
With a smile as bright as the sun that warms my heart you chase away the sorrow that clouds my life
With skin that rivals the marvels of the universe time itself stands still and take notice
With the moon for your crown and the earth for your throne you give a whole new meaning to the title Ms. Universe.

Written by Keith Edward Baucum

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Reading this, I thought of how powerful beauty can be. It makes and breaks hearts, changes destinies and halts the sun and moon in its tracks, with just a flick of its wrist.

Such a superb poem on feminine beauty and its earth shattering charms...

[Moonie]

This sounds nice...descriptions are good...but it might sound better if you break the lines more often..that would make the poem look more eye catching and appealing...just an opinion... :)

[KeithEBaucum]

Thank you.