Love and Loyalty

Love and Loyalty

Love stood before Loyalty her soon to be husband and a chapel full of wedding guests wearing a crown of olive leaves, dressed in light, and holding a bouquet of pink lilies. Love and Loyalty looked into each other's eyes and exchanged vows.

Loyalty: "My dream of making you my wife has become a reality. I promise to hold you in my arms and keep you safe for all eternity. I promise to cherish you and treat you like royalty."

Love: "I've been waiting for this moment ever since my heart took it's first beat. Like doves flying on the winds of peace I promise to uphold this marriage above the clouds of serenity."

Surrounded by all the virtues Loyalty and Love kissed.

Written by: Keith Edward Baucum

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I like this little poem very much. The word Eternity jarrs with me, only because I was promised Eternity once and it lasted ten years. Maybe the definition has changed :) This is very nicely penned and poetic too.

Chris