Best Poetry. (rhyme or not?)

Ok, I am having a crack at this too, so here's my 2c worth.

Paint a picture

tell a story,

share your sorrow

howl your glory.

Take me where

I've never been,

show me sights

as yet unseen.

Make me laugh

Or make me cry,

if really sad

my tears I'll dry.

Lift my spirit

stir my soul,

arouse my senses

make me whole

These things I seek

in  reading time,

for me its bonus 

with a rhyme.

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

great flow mate...........all in all..............terrific........

[Keith]

Thanks Doc, its a hot topic at the moment.

[SyberRose]

Nicely penned...enjoyed reading...I liked the rhythm...Rose

[Keith]

Thank you Rose, glad you enjoyed it.

[Jack...]

I think you did a great job with the rhyme and meter of this piece. It seems effortless to me. Nice one Keith.

[Keith]

Thanks Jack, just my thoughts on the matter.

[carol burgess romance]

very good rhyme and easy flow, I like rhyme when it is well done and believe it has a place in todays poetry

[Keith]

Thank you again Carol. Getting lots of feedback here, most seem to agree with you.

[Leslie Philibert]

this races along, as Lydia points out, perfectly rhymed...excellent !

[Keith]

Thanks again for the kind review Leslie. It was a fun write for this hot topic at the moment.

[Lydia Shutter]

easy to read, your rhyming staccato lines were enjoyable. Flawless rhythm! Lydi**

[Keith]

Thank you Lydia, I appreciate you dropping by and leaving kind words.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i am not usually a rhyme fan;....but these short melodic lines really have a kick a*s beat to them...

i was tapping my toes...

jacob

[Keith]

Thank you Jacob, just a little ditty that popped up on this current hot topic.

[TL Boehm]

I write a lot of prosey stuff and free verse only because I am lazy. I do appreciate a rhyme and a form. This is a great piece.

[Keith]

Thank you Tammy, I think you were one of my first friends here and came through support when I first posted on WC. I have indeed found some gems among your work, in both forms.

[Marie]

I do rhyming poetry myself, and I kno you do. And you do it very well.

[Keith]

Thanks again Marie, I appreciate your support.

[MsJewel]

I think rhyme adds a little something to a poem. Your rhyme in this one is perfection! :) Julie

[Keith]

Thank you so much Julie, I appreciate your kind words.