My Grandfather

My Grandfather

A Poem by Keith
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Written for "A Tribute to our Parents/Grandparents" Contest (Tate Morgan) Thanks for the motivation Tate, been wanting to do this for a while.

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The lines upon his thin weathered face

A roadmap of his hard life.

His formal education was brief

His mind was sharp as a knife.

But in bushmanship and parenthood

He was the top of the class,

Then from the college of real hard knocks

With straight honors he did pass.

.

His poker face gave nothing away

But with his eyes he smiled.

I saw it each time he greeted me

The love of his first grandchild.

He'd lift me high up into the air

And sat me on his shoulder.

Childhood memories ever more precious

The more that I grow older.

 

I Lived with him for several years

From near the age of seven.

Our hearts were laden with sorrow then,

My  mother gone to heaven.

For him the loss of his first born child

Maybe forged from grief our bond.

I felt that in my grandfathers house

Was where I truly belonged.

 

I followed his every single step

It just seemed so right somehow.

We split the kindling and lit the stove,

Gathered eggs and milked the cow.

Together we worked in his garden

Where he turned the sod with ease,

He grew rows and rows of vegetables

And we'd share those fresh picked peas.

 

When he spoke it was in a mumble

And he barely moved his lips.

But it paid to listen very hard

Coz his wit was dry as chips.

He'd often slip in a funny line

Without a break in his pace.

Like 'Cut a hole in the seat of your pants

To keep the flies off your face.'

 

He told you straight what was on his mind

No time for etiquette rules.

Social graces were never his strength

And he had no time for fools.

'I'm not going to her funeral',

One occasion he did shout.

'Best bury that old b***h facing down

To ensure that she can't scratch out.'

 

Still very close in my teenage years.

We'd talk the hours away.

I was always keen to learn from him

And about his Bushman's way.

He taught me as much as I could learn

And ignited my bushman's spark.

A crack shot with his trusty rifle

He usually found his mark.

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Those memories of rabbit hunting

The wasted bullets were few.

If less rabbits got than bullets shot

He'd ask 'where's the other two?'

And if you went for that real long shot,

A mere spec  in your rifle sight.

He'd not give you credit for the kill

And just say it had 'died of fright'.

 

His front yard was always manicured,

Each plant grew how it was meant.

Lavender bush along every path

Filling the air with it's scent.

And still to this day the slightest whiff

Of lavender in the air,

I am taken right back to his front yard

And I'll see him standing there.

 

© 2013 Keith


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Keith - this is a lovely tribute to someone you admire so much. You have written so many traits throughout the write. Your love for him was so strong in every stanza throughout this whole write, the way you write so fondly of him, it made me tear up. How he brought you up after you mother - sadly - passed away. It's like, he's your hero - if you know what I mean.

"I Lived with him for several years
From near the age of seven.
Our hearts were laden with sorrow then,
My mother gone to heaven.
For him the loss of his first born child
Maybe forged from grief our bond.
I felt that in my grandfather’s house
Was where I truly belonged."

Those lines just hit me, they were so emotional. This is such an emotional write, for me, and I think you've done a fantastic job. Definitely going in my faves! 100/100!

Good luck in the contest, I wish you all the best!

Posted 11 Years Ago


s y e

11 Years Ago

I love it, I love that you all feel like family, and none of you are 'old farts'! It's always a plea.. read more
Keith

11 Years Ago

Thank you Noodle. I will let you into a secret. ssshhhhh! Sometimes we feel as old as the compan.. read more
s y e

11 Years Ago

Shhhhhh, it's between us. ;) Nah, none of you are old. You're all young if you ask me! :D I love you.. read more
That's a lovely thing to write about your grandfather. Your memories of him are a fine tribute.

I remember riding on the tractor with my grandfather. In fact, i married my second husband because he reminded me of my grandfather.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Keith

11 Years Ago

We are indeed the lucky ones Marie, not all get quality time with a wonderful grandfather. Strange.. read more
A beautiful tribute to someone you love dearly. Your admiration for this man is apparent in every single stanza. I love the imagery, the smell of the lavender in his yard, but most of all the wonderful feeling this poem left me wth. Very well written and a delight to read! :) Julie

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Keith

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind review Julie. I am a grandfather myself these days, love the job and.. read more
Your words of tribute for your dear grandfather are ones that certainly zing the heartstrings of this gal. You have given us so many endearing traits about him, as well as those that are humorous, of the way he spoke and you had to listen a bit harder, of his hunting skills, his teaching ability, his nurturing of you when your mother died, all the way to his love and care of the memorable lavender bushes that one has to feel as if you know him!
I just don't think you could have written this with more love and admiration than you have! It is just wonderful!!!
Oh, I almost forgot your rhyming is also "spot-on"!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Keith

11 Years Ago

Why thank you so much Sheila. I do work hard at the rhyming and really appreciate the feedback.
You have painted a portrait of a real and fascinating man, as well as your love and admiration for him. This is so touching and powerful...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Keith

11 Years Ago

Thanks Rita, I appreciate your kind review.
Tears are literally streaming down my face.. Don't you know how genuinely sentimental and emotional we ladies are? lol Ok I will have to go pull some of my family poetry up.. I have nothing as emotionally charged as this one though.. What a beautiful tribute to your grandfather and to the way he raised you after your mother passed.. Keith I just want to hug you so bad right now..

"His front yard was always manicured,
Each plant grew how it was meant.
Lavender bush along every path
Filling the air with it's scent.
And still to this day the slightest whiff
Of lavender in the air,
I am taken right back to his front yard
And I'll see him standing there."

This poem is going into my favorites.. xo Rose



Posted 11 Years Ago


Keith

11 Years Ago

Ah Rose, I will consider myself hugged, I feel much better now. Let me offer you a tissue... Tha.. read more
What a beautiful ode to your Grandfather. Outstanding job Keith

Posted 11 Years Ago


Keith

11 Years Ago

Many thanks BR, I really appreciate you taking the time to read.
But it paid to listen very hard
Coz his wit was dry as chips.
He'd often slip in a funny line
Without a break in his pace.
Like 'Cut a hole in the seat of your pants
To keep the flies off your face.'

Salt and light this man was. What a beautiful touching tribute. I'm biting my lip so I don't cry at the office.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Keith

11 Years Ago

Thank you Tammy, I hope I didn't cause you embarrassment. My Pop was a character from another time,.. read more
The last stanza of this wonderful tribute was so very poignant. Lovely poem that paints us a really colourful and detailed picture of your grandfather.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Keith

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the kind words Gabriel, I appreciate you dropping in.
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This reminds me of my Grandfather. Thank you. I know you wrote it about yours but I can feel my Grand Father in it to.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Keith

11 Years Ago

Thanks Ron, I guess we were the lucky ones, not everyone gets to spend a lot of time with their gran.. read more
ron

11 Years Ago

Very true.

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Gippsland, Victoria, Australia



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