My Grandson John.

My Grandson John.

A Poem by Keith

 

My alarm clock has changed,
Its now a face pat or shake.
It makes the sweet  sound,
Of “Pop, are you awake?".
It goes off, Oh so early,
Not yet a hint  of the sun.
But a perfect opportunity,
To get the  good stuff done.

 

Just the two of us for breakfast,
At the wooden bench we  sit,
We discuss most weighty matters,
Like his  pirate ship sand pit.
Each new day brings  a surprise ,
A delight to watch him grow.
There is always something new,
More words, or he learned to throw.

 

Its seems I now  understand
Most everything he can say,
Is it me who is slowly learning,
His magical two year old way?
He finds many ways to say what he wants,
And when  there’s communication stress,
He takes my hand to show me,
Or  finds  another way to express.

 

When he announces his intention,
To put his  "whiskas on Pop",
It seems I can’t quite bring myself,
To say that he should stop.
To my rough unshaven face,
He rubs his soft smooth chin,
He thinks  that I'm the one prickled,
I feel guilty,  I know its a sin.

 

I pretend that it really tickles,
So he giggles and does it some more,
Until the rash on his cute little face ,
Is pink and looking rather sore.
On my shoulders he rides so high,
He is Superman with his cape.
From a battered old cardboard box,
He makes good  his comical escape.

 


Nightly news and current affairs,
Are now a thing of my past.
Just Giggle & Hoot in prime time,
He gets excited, having a blast.
To him the puppets are real, 
We sit and watch it’s my choice.
Enduring the awful sound,
Of Jimmy Giggle's squeaky voice.

 

When he is wild and  running amok,
Or makes an ear piercing squeal,
He will solemnly commit to behave,
Signed and sealed with: "It’s a  deal!".
Its a formal binding agreement,
That lasts a minute or two,
Then off exuberant and playful,
With  much more mischief to pursue.

 

Every day a brand new adventure,
He is nothing short of full on
As far as I’m concerned he  is perfect,
My little grandson John.

© 2013 Keith


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What a wonderful ode to one of life's greatest joys, our grandchildren when young. You got off to a great start, comparing him to an alarm clock, and maintained it to the end. Thank you for this. It was very pleasant reading and brought back fond memories. Richard

Posted 11 Years Ago


Keith

11 Years Ago

Thanks again Richard. We had a big empty nest here (about 60 miles east of Melbourne) until Februar.. read more
Simply tugs at the heart, warm and relatable, what a charming tribute.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Keith

11 Years Ago

Thank you Frieda, one of my first. I appreciate your kind words.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You're welcome Keith, I can tell it came straight from your heart to the page....
A tribute here with this write...and the many aspects in the lines that you share with us throughout this passage...they grow fast and seems when you blink they get twice as big...I miss those time with my nephew...Now he's all grown up...a young man...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Keith

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much Glen, they ceratinly do. He has been living iunder my roof for the past 6 month.. read more
Glen Yumang Manese

11 Years Ago

Interestingly enough..just as one is coming of age...another is born...I'm a great uncle...and I sti.. read more
Keith This took my breath away.. I have a two year old grandson also. They life two hours away and so he calls me on the phone to get "Gramma Heith hug you" lol so sweet at that age..

Heith has a brand new baby brother.. Grandchildren are such a gift.. This is penned from the heart a granddaddy... And your form, flow, and rhyme are fantastic here.. My feelings as a grandmother are the same.. but your story is priceless. huggs, Rose

Posted 11 Years Ago


shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

One of your first poems?????? Thats amazing.. Yes David is very good at time and meter.. excellt poe.. read more
Keith

11 Years Ago

Humble in your presence Oh Queen of verse.
shallimarRose

11 Years Ago

Awww, first they call me queen of erotica and now queen of verse.. lol
I may have to stick aro.. read more
Oh Keith,this brought a lump to my throat!
Beautifully written and so pure from your heart.
Love it :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Keith

11 Years Ago

Thank you Amanda, reading your profile and poems have jogged a few memories here. We have 6, all no.. read more
AmandaN

11 Years Ago

Wonderful :-)
Your writing is fantastic. Consistently engaging with an easy to get into flow and rhyming that I couldn't even hope for, heh. Keep it up!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Keith

11 Years Ago

Thanks for taking the time to read, I really appreciate your kind comments. Keith.
This is a lovely piece for your grandson. :) I'm sure when he reads it he'll love it and be so thankful. :)

Another awesome read.

~ Noodle.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Keith

11 Years Ago

Thank you again Noodle.
s y e

11 Years Ago

Welcome.
A beautiful write to your grandson. Wise and msytical..but they do grow up so fast, *sigh*
Wonderful imagery

Posted 11 Years Ago


Keith

11 Years Ago

Thanks Jadey.
Such a sweet tribute to your grandson. This was a pleasure to read, it tripped off my tongue so well. He will read this one day, turn to you and grin. That is a gift, Keith. Well done, sir! Angi~

Posted 11 Years Ago


Keith

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Angi.

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Gippsland, Victoria, Australia



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