Love and Hate Relationship

Love and Hate Relationship

A Poem by KeiseRaven

I loved you like a friday evening
but you hated me like monday morning

I loved you like a bottle of whiskey on the rocks
but you hated me like a hangover

I loved you like a jar of chocolate chip cookies
but you hated me like a box of oatmeal raisin cookies

I loved you like a cup of coffee in the morning
but you hated me like a missed heartbeat

I loved you like a dream come true
but you hated me like a worst nightmare, bluer than blue

© 2015 KeiseRaven


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Nice work, I enjoyed this poem it burst well and you save your one and only rhyme for the last line!
Thank you.


Posted 7 Years Ago


Different, unique and covering both aspects of the relationship. Glad to visit and enjoy...:).....

Posted 9 Years Ago


I liked this poem. I liked the old saying. "Love and hate. A heart beat apart"
"I loved you like a dream come true
but you hated me like a worst nightmare, bluer than blue"
The above lines were my favorite. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 9 Years Ago



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KeiseRaven
KeiseRaven

Pasig, NCR, Philippines



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