Tell me

For my heartache

Tell me where do I start

When fate lets us cross our paths

Tell me where do I start

When you and I said Hi for the first time

Tell me where do I start

When we talk about each other day in and day out

Tell me where do I start

When I saw your smile that lit the universe

Tell me where do I start

When we started breaking down and building up each other at the same time

Tell me where do I start

When you ripped through my chest and started knocking on the door of my heart

Tell me where do I start

When I started falling in love with you

Tell me where do I start

When all I can do is think about those eyes that see through my soul

Tell me where do I start

When my world started revolving around your world

Tell me where do I start

When I considered you as the lone star of my dark blue sky

Tell me where do I start

When the reason for my insomnia every night is not her but you

Tell me where do I start

When the reason for waking up in the morning everyday is not her but you

Tell me where do I start

When I prayed for your happiness more than mine

Tell me where do I start

When I just want to tell you how I feel for you

Tell me where do I start

When I gathered all the courage that was left in me just to confess

Tell me where do I start

When the night came and I spoke the words you feared the most to hear

Tell me where do I start

When you realized that I am just a friend, no more no less

Tell me where do I start

When my heart shattered to million pieces

Tell me where do I start

When I shed tears night in and night out

Tell me where do I start

When I just cannot contain the grief I feel inside

Tell me where do I start

When I just cannot pick up the pieces and pull myself together again

Tell me where do I start

When after all, I still feel the same way for you

Tell me where do I start

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Reviews

[Wem Ortiz]

now i see how you develop your own style of poetry the repeated chorus in which I eventually imagine voices repeating the lines and you shouting each messages. I feel the pain with this one. the questions that might or may not remain answered. sensational it is.

[Shei]

Very moving and heartfelt poetry I could feel the emotional pain in the end

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

It's wonderful poem, we find all sensation in it. It's the God gift to see your soul spirit beside you. Thank you so much for these great lines.

[3X3MPLER]

emotions well potrayed.good work