Forever Ending

This whatever you want it to be

Clouds barricade to sky,

blocking the sunshine.

Rain pours over,

a single silhouette.

For I am the one who made the barricade.

The dam of the soul,

breaks with a single push.

A salty river flows,

down the expressionless face.

For I am the one who let the dam fail.

The field is nothing,

it never ends. No hiding,

from the darkness.

For I am the one who destroyed the land.

A mask made from glass,

shields a single silhouette.

Painted with

a solar eclipse.

For I am the one who crafted the mask.

The mask cracks,

Cracks turn to shatters.

Unveiling the sorrow inside.

Opaque pitch,

turns to translucent obsidian.

For I am the one who cracked my mask.

The river starts to dry,

the door to the soul repairs.

Landscape heightens,

Around a single silhouette.

For you are the one who patched my dam.

Clouds glow,

as they break away.

A sun beam gleams,

through a darkened sky.

For you are the one who chased my demon.

Landscape flattens,

till nothing is left.

Clouds turn to pitch,

blocking the light.

For you are the one who left me stranded.

The dam gets bumped,

once again.

A river once dried,

flows forever stronger.

For we are the ones who flow through the cycle.

Reviews

[Alucard6336]

You see, I don't want this to be whatever I want it to be. This, is absolutely beautiful. What must I do to hear the meaning of this poem from your lips?

This was spectacular from start to finish. It is enigma, and I hope I can have the authors keen insight. Bravo! :)

[KeiraOndrus]

Thanks! I'm so happy people find my poems enjoyable and meaningful.

[SariahM]

Looking back, even if it was a year, I now truly see how much emotion you poured into this piece... You have a gift Keira. I hope you continue writing,
Sariah

[Savon Wingo]

I really enjoyed your poem great job please keep writing!