I can, but I don't
A Poem by
KeiraOndrus
This is whatever you want it to be
I can see you, but I have no eyes.
I talk to you,
yet, have no voice.
We reach out our hands,
they don't touch.
I know your warmth,
I can't feel it.
Separated by borders,
our souls connected.
I know who you are,
yet, I have no idea.
© 2015 KeiraOndrus
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I think we all want for that someone...and feel that someone out there. I know a lot of people don't believe in their 'other half' so to speak, or something of that nature. I think some people feel it strongly because it is true for some souls. I don't know but your poem makes me ponder all of that stuff. very nice work
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Interesting flow of words. Left something for the reader to ponder. Thank you for sharing the entertaining poetry.
Coyote
Posted 8 Years Ago
Interesting flow of words. Left something for the reader to ponder. Thank you for sharing the entertaining poetry.
Coyote
this is amazing. to me it shows a lack of emotional attachment to reality and a longing for feeling. its really deep and very well written.
Posted 8 Years Ago
this is amazing. to me it shows a lack of emotional attachment to reality and a longing for feeling. its really deep and very well written.
I think we all want for that someone...and feel that someone out there. I know a lot of people don't believe in their 'other half' so to speak, or something of that nature. I think some people feel it strongly because it is true for some souls. I don't know but your poem makes me ponder all of that stuff. very nice work
Posted 8 Years Ago
I think we all want for that someone...and feel that someone out there. I know a lot of people don't believe in their 'other half' so to speak, or something of that nature. I think some people feel it strongly because it is true for some souls. I don't know but your poem makes me ponder all of that stuff. very nice work
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Hmm. some of it reminds me of a long distance relationship while the other is a mystery. very well done! I loved it
Posted 8 Years Ago
Hmm. some of it reminds me of a long distance relationship while the other is a mystery. very well done! I loved it
This is a mysterious one, but interesting
Posted 8 Years Ago
This is a mysterious one, but interesting
I love the way you wrote this! :) Simple yet the emotion, the intangible presence, is strongly affecting :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
I love the way you wrote this! :) Simple yet the emotion, the intangible presence, is strongly affecting :)
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