Nothing

This is whatever you want it to be

Nothing.

To do,

To say.

Lonely.

Waiting.

Clock ticking.

Hollow hearts,

Everywhere.

No choices.

Weak.

Scared.

Lonely.

Nothing.

Reviews

[Alucard6336]

Hmmmm aren't we all hollow in someway? Why should it be what other way I want? Describing a blank canvas does not make it more than a blank canvas. Food for thought.

So does this describe you? I use all my writing, be it my poems, blog entries, novellas, and novels to describe a version of my thinking or what I believe in. Yet even more food for thought.

Now you have good talent, and hey if life is already empty, or a downward spiral, why not add me to your friends list? I'll give you good feedback on everything I can get to. Great work on this poem :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem honest and direct. Sometime too much time is a burden. Nice use of words. Create loneliness and sad reflection. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[SariahM]

I like the way the words snap off of each other, making life seem... so boring yuno?