Perception is a Fickle Thing

Perception is a Fickle Thing

A Poem by Ren Black

"Maybe if things were different," she said,
"Maybe if life didn't change."
She rebelled against my aggression.
She drenched my burning rage.

Tracing the lines of the beginning,
I could tell you here and now,
Who really started this...
I could even tell you how.

All the words from all the songs
Suddenly became too real.
It's as if they told me who she was
And how I should feel.

Waltzing through existance
As casually as could be.
A soaring break of black
I still can barely see.

She wrapped me in her words,
She cut me with them too.
Memorising, tantalising.
Used against me just a few.

"Maybe if things were different,"
They cut me like a knife. 
Words so unempathetic,
As she demurely left my life.

Tangoing out as quickly
As she sullenly came.
Dancing out on rooftops
and I'll always know her name.

All it took was seconds, 
Not minutes, hours or days.
Is it an even dance floor?
It is, or at least she says. 

This pathological liar,
This bully, this fiend, this friend,
Has broken every bone in my body,
But her time was soon to end. 

So it's over and done;
I've said all I can say.
She's gone now with my organs.
More distant, than far away.

But was it all for nothing?
Another tally on her wall?
I'll never understand
That I "caught [her] from [her] fall." 

Maybe she can't talk?
And ergo can't explain.
But she's only human,
She must feel the pain.

Words are all she has:
Her weapon of abuse.
I'll bet she never thought
She could put them to better use.

© 2013 Ren Black


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This is such a powerful poem, i love the imagery you've used and especially the 'another tally on her wall', it's really interesting. May I ask what it is about?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ren Black

11 Years Ago

This is a poem is about the narrator meeting a woman and falling in love with her but she never felt.. read more
This is an exquisitely penned work about the heart-wrenching pain of a break-up. Exquisite because sometimes art is birthed from our sorrows. I especially love the lines :
"This pathological liar,
This bully, this fiend, this friend"
-often we feel betrayed in a sense, but we still love them, and that is where the conflicting emotions come in....so relatable!!!!!! Hope you heal!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ren Black

11 Years Ago

While I do thank you so much for your very kind words, this poem is not about a break up - however I.. read more
i feel the pain...seems like we all get cut up by the ignorance of another person....your last four lines wrap it up beautifully....im stealing them :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ren Black

11 Years Ago

I'm glad that you were able to decipher this poem as "ignorance of another person." I have posted th.. read more
joey

11 Years Ago

thats poetry though, to put it out there and let the masses identify what they need to....the poet n.. read more
Ren Black

11 Years Ago

I know what you mean. Long gone are the days when one could admire poetry for the skill involved, th.. read more
i cant stop reading it....its a fab!
i got no words...great job!
keep writing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ren Black

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
"Tracing the lines of the beginning,

I could tell you here and now,

Who really started this...

I could even tell you how.




All the words from all the songs

Suddenly became too real."

I like those lines the most in this splendid poem...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ren Black

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much. :)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

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Ren Black
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I'm Ren and I'm an unpublished (for now) writer and poet. I spend a large portion of my day writing, brainstorming, editing and rewriting as writing is my passion. My Wattpad account is here. My.. more..

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