Foreplay

Foreplay

A Poem by 𝔸ʂɾıéli໐ຖ Ş໐นl

A passionate kiss on the lip.
A passionate kiss on the neck, accompanied with a moan
Heavy breathing and an increase in temperature
Her hands feel his abs,
his chest,
then finally rest on his neck.
She wants him to focus everything on Her
She grips firmly-
too firmly, he thinks to himself.
He reaches for her hands and tries to loosen Her grip,
without ruining the mood.
She doesn't seem to get the message.
In fact she tightens Her grip...
A gasp for air...
He grabs onto Her hands again,
an attempt to pull Her arms away.
His eyes widen-
desperation is in his eyes.
He coughs & chokes as he tries to utter Her name
He puts his hands on Her shoulders to push away.

Confusion...

Thoughts swirl up in my head
but none seem to have the answer.
Lungs begin to hurt-
The colours seem to be fading.
The hands that I felt around my neck-
there were initially warm
but cant be felt anymore
The lights seem to be darkening.
One last thrust to get her off me,
but my attempts are futile.
My body feels numb.
My body feels heavy.
The only thing I can do is stare.
Stare as Her emotionless face watches mine.
"Please..."
I try to whisper
but the words don't escape my mouth.

Limp...

His body lay motionless.
His head dangling from the neck .
Her brown eyes stare into his lifeless eyes.
The pulse she initially felt in Her hands was gone,
but she kept Her hands in place for another minute.
She drew his face closer to Hers.
Kissed his forehead,
then dropped his corpse onto the bed.
She stood up and walked towards the window.
The sun rays displaying her beauty.
She stared into the distance and watched as the birds flew by...

© 2019 𝔸ʂɾıéli໐ຖ Ş໐นl


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very good, not what I expected at all. Very descriptive and well done. Congrats.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Wow! Intimately moving and so incredibly real.

Posted 5 Years Ago


𝔸ʂɾıéli໐ຖ Ş໐นl

5 Years Ago

yes, thank u for taking the time to read
Lea Sheryn

5 Years Ago

You're very welcome. I enjoyed it very much.
This is very dark but also extremely light and vivid.
I like that in the beginning, your lines conjure short flashes of imagery and as a reader I anticipated a build of of a sensual affair - what a twist! It is an entertaining read, not what I expected - great work!
Laura

Posted 5 Years Ago


𝔸ʂɾıéli໐ຖ Ş໐นl

5 Years Ago

oh wow, thank u very much lol

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𝔸ʂɾıéli໐ຖ Ş໐นl
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Zimbabwe



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