Incense smoke

Incense smoke

In a cold room

Ascends heavenward

Reviews

[Spoken]

ahh... i'm ready to transcend! Word choices are everything in haiku form, spot on :)

[An Ordinary Woman]

Yes it does. You've been burning incense too?

Nice thought provoking write, Kees.

[alternative_be]

It also produces a heavenly scent!

[Kris Tate]

This is a very good example of Zen Haiku. These few words convey great imagery and a feeling of peace.