Tears of blood

Just a song I wrote...

This is my life, this is me
Can't you see
what you are doing to me
You held me close
You could hear my heart
You knew you would leave
right from the start

Tears of blood
Dripping from my soul
You heard me cry
A promise made
Until the day we die

Every breath I take
Is another mistake
You broke me down
You made me fall
You couldn't care less
I gave you my all....

Tears of blood
Can't take the pain away
I wish you knew
This is my life this is me
Just another long
soon to be forgotten memory

Reviews

[Geminair]

this is very potent! and personally i can relate to every single word of it,including having to deal with the internal pain on your own.Sure friends can chat can help and they may have even been though the same,but its YOUR pain,fueled by the unfairness that you gave them EVERYTHING and are left with nothing but the solidarity it brings.

Your writing though is flawless ,its shape,to the point,no punches held back and i cant help but admire that and hope to see more of your obvious talent soon.

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p.s.

It is not JUST a song,its also a window.