Hey you

Hey you

 

With my heart in your hands

How does it feel?

 

Remember that it loves you

No matter what you think.

 

It's yours to keep.

Don't break it.

 

Hey you

 

With my heart in your hands

 

Love me always.

Reviews

[Travis Lawrence]

Nice, I can see the heart, completely helpless, with a glare of pity. I like this. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it!

-Travis

[Mark Pearce]

You seem to approach your works in a normal, unaffected manner.

No fluff. No puffoonery. Just plain talk. No "hey look at me!"

That's good stuff.

[forfila]

wow,, I really, really like this:) so simple yet deep, truthful and a little mysterious. Maybe a little play of words going on in there... I love it, nice write, how could anyone break that heart of yours..

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Me

[thecoolone52]

ohhhhh i really enjoyed the short kinda vunerable love poem... it was to the point and written nice with all the colors and so forth... i liked the stylish red font.... haha anyway nice write