Enough

Enough

A Poem by KeenanSass
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I wrote this at 12am while I couldn't sleep. I literally had had enough.

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Enough day dreams that never start
and nightmares that never end.
Enough saying I'm sorry
falling upon ears that never mend.

Enough promises of a better tomorrow
those come with a price.
Enough "time heals all wounds"
when wounds wont heal with time.

Enough replaying of stories
that end with the same tragedy.
Enough willing my Prince Charming
to come back and rescue me.

Enough worrying about the future.
She has yet to present herself.
Enough dwelling on the past
where loved ones are lost.

Enough of the pain
Presented by those around me.
Enough longing for us.
It does not end the hypocrisy.

Enough is Enough.
And so it must be.
Enough just was never enough.
For you, enough just wasn't me. 

© 2016 KeenanSass


Author's Note

KeenanSass
I found myself slipping in and out of rhythm. Not intended. Please ignore the way in which it is written and focus more on what I am saying and the imagery I'm trying to bring across

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Hello Keenan. I appreciate this work of yours very much. It's meaningful and on point. As for the way it was written (my opinion), I find it just right for the message it is trying to convey. It has a conversational feel. Reading it felt like I was actually watching a break-up scene, and listening to the words being delivered. I loved the last stanza best. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeenanSass

8 Years Ago

Thank You so much for taking the time to read it. It is much appreciated!



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amazing piece .. good job!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


KeenanSass

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
Hello Keenan. I appreciate this work of yours very much. It's meaningful and on point. As for the way it was written (my opinion), I find it just right for the message it is trying to convey. It has a conversational feel. Reading it felt like I was actually watching a break-up scene, and listening to the words being delivered. I loved the last stanza best. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeenanSass

8 Years Ago

Thank You so much for taking the time to read it. It is much appreciated!

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Added on May 5, 2016
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Tags: Relationships, heartache, breakup, tears

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KeenanSass
KeenanSass

Cape Town, Western Province, South Africa



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University Graduate leaving for China soon. Recently been broken up with my ex of 4 years. By no means a professional in my writing skills. What I feel is what I write. Might not make sense. Here .. more..

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