Ship in A Bottle.

Ship in A Bottle.

A Poem by Keeley

Jump to the sky.

Dance with stars.

Scream out loud no matter where you are.

 

Stop being a ship in a bottle.

Actually sail the sea.

Because if you just let your fear go.

 

There's no telling where you'll be.

© 2011 Keeley


Author's Note

Keeley
For everyone whose ready to be freeee....♥

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This poem is short but sweet, you really got your point across. I admire that. It is something I think we can all relate to. Good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I super love the comparison here. And it's short but really meaningful. Great job. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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A terrific read, short sweet and deep. Your work conveys an awful lot in such few lines. Almost as if you ration yourself to so many words so you're going to make the most out of each one. Terrific

Posted 13 Years Ago


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i love it and the analogy is perfect, short and simple but strong and moving great job. c:

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Very nice work. Makes me willing to run out on the street and shout, scream, without caring about anyone or anything.

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Keeley
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I dream, drink tea, and write. I'm an original nerd really. I sleep and read entirely too much. I care too much and trust too little. more..

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