Never.

Like a fog over my eyes, you had me so blinded.

I thought I could see your heart, while you had mine binded.

I could have gone on in our forever just you and I.

Little did I know another girl was in your eye.

I knew I was had, I thought we were forever.

Then she comes along and whispers in my ear.

Never.

Reviews

[paparapapa]

Just a few errors like "while you had my binded." Is it supposed to be while you had mine (as in the heart) binded or while you had me binded? Oh, and binded is not a word, but I guess for the sake of rhymes, you can use it. Haha. And "I knew I was had," I don't really get the meaning of that line. Just a little bit of editing will make this so much better. But I really loved the whispering part. And it's not the guy! But it's the girl who did it. Sooo, cool twist. Love the poem. ;)

[Ubiquitous]

I love the meaning and the flow, well done!

[VelvetKissesXo]

I like this....I can relate....
Almost made me cry..

[etxcp]

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[EMF]

As good as this poem is, the last line truly sends a shiver down the spine. Your set up for that one word is sheer perfection and you handle both the rhyme and the flow like a skilled craftsman. And when the last line hits, it has exceptional power. Superb.

[WhiteRabbit]

This is an intriguing piece that has good lines. It has an ancient feel to it as though Greek or Roman in origin.

[Keeley]

No problem(: I'm sort of a perfectionist. Binded is indeed a word. It means to tie or fasten tightly. The phrase "I knew I was had..." is a phrase the means. I knew I was fooled or I knew I'd been tricked. Thanks for the reviews guys(:

[Break The Broken]

the fixes made the flow better and easier to understand thank your for taking the time to fix it.

[Break The Broken]

wow for something u wrote in 2 mins it was really good ;p i love the end where the other girk whispheres never. great write