Brightest star will you remember me?

Brightest star and no one notices?

As the sun sets a boy watches the skies as the day turns to night, as clouds turns to stars, but one particular stars draws his attention, a star so bright yet unnoticed by many. 

Staring into the bright star he asks. "Will they ever see you the way I see you?"

Staring into his own reflection he asks himself. "Will you ever see me the way I see you?"

A star so bright it makes his heart throb for the first time, a star so pure, so ambitious, so determines, through thick and thin, through much obstacles, still made it to its destination, a star so admirable and so Beautiful, Yet nobody seems to notice you. Why?

Though the paths may not align once again to let me witness you once more, you are the most Beautiful thing i have ever witnessed. 

You changed me for the better, witnessing a star this bright lightens up my day, Is this love or merely and infatuation? however, no matter how hard I try it doesn't go away, the feeling of being by you is firmly stuck to my brain, the feeling of you talking to me makes my head spin in circles.

I Can't Think of Loving Anybody But You, Nor Can I Think Of A Life Without You

Author's Note

this is the first time ive written, please be patient C:

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i love this dialogue between the boy and the star. it has a dream-like feeling, that draws the reader in.
i see that you are new to writing. the most important thing is to practice: write a lot and pour your heart into each work. the second is to read a lot (why not read my stories????? xD)
from reading this short piece, it's evident that you have many stories you wish to tell. my best wishes on your journey.

[Keegan]

Thank you very much!, I'll be sure to check out your work!!

[GlendaK]

Hi! It is beautiful! Your love you allow to be exposed to the world without flimsy fakery. It's true love.

I like your cat with the thumb up ;)