Bonfires Revisited

Bonfires Revisited

Sleepwalking in dream

I wish to travel back to that night

Where the ocean screams

Of a love that blossomed alive 

The waves they capture a picture of us

Dazed by the moons spell

We sit on the beach reminiscing for hours

Bonfires take me back there

 

To wishing on a shooting star

For time to stand still forever this hour

So you and I could drink in each other’s eyes

And life like a breeze would just float us by

When the sky and the sea meet in the distance

Love just flows between us absent resistance

Fireflies illuminate the feelings we share

Bonfires take me back there

 

Where we sit close to the fire 

And the flames reveal our desires

Clarity in our minds as our lips intertwine 

And the sound of our kiss resonates

An electric feel through time and space

Where the sand slips underneath our palms 

When we reach to embrace each other in our arms

Bonfires take me back there...

                                                                  ...Where love lasts forever                       

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                              

Author's Note

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the artwork and the wishes in the poetry. I liked how you used the repetition. Make the poem more solid and understandable. All of us wish for a chance to change a place or a time. Thank you Keegan for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[KeeD]

Thank you so much Coyote!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Keegan.

[Rob Santana]

AMAZING! This is a masterpiece. It gives such bright colours to your passion and emotions. In my opinion, this is the definition of "DEEP." Bravo my friend.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

when we look into that fire, memories reflect in the flames...and the sounds remind us of what was back then...

beautiful imagery.

j.

[ms. barrie]

glad you extended this kee, i love the enriched imagery of romantic sensuality, and peace you incorporated into this...

Where we sit close to the fire
And the flames reveal our desires
Clarity in our minds as our lips intertwine
And the sound of our kiss resonates
An electric feel through time and space
Where the sand slips underneath our palms
When we reach to embrace each other in our arms
Bonfires take me back there...
...Where love is forever

original wording, *i remember the first version well* -- yet both pieces are tied together.
poetic beauty that leaves one with a sigh. enjoy the repetition/lyrical flow as well.
great ink. thanks for sharing :)