Beyond the black hole

Traveller the stars they cease to guide your flight

Odd is the sun that shines at night

Onward into the dark of day

No home, no home for you to stay

 

Traveller you left us all behind

Old are we your mankind

Forgotten memories you would not say

Now home, now home is far away

 

Traveller lose yourself into the black abyss

Earth forever shall be missed

Discover a distant space 

New home, new home for the human race

Reviews

[Ambika Katoch]

"traveller the stars the cease to guide your flight
Odd is the sun that shine at night
Onward into the dark of day
No home, no home for you to stay" i like these lines
this is a beautiful and excellent poem..I Love it !! xx Keep it up!!!

[KeeD]

thank you :)

[ms. barrie]

brilliant poem that takes one on a celestial journey, reminiscent of
2001 space odyssey. your imagery & word play is captivating
in its unique-ness. thoroughly enjoyed this write...
thank you for the ride. happy writings to you
~ xx. - barrie

[ms. barrie]

bloody hell, can't add to favs *yet* will keep trying, kee

[KeeD]

thanks for the review barrie, this is one of the few poems that im actually quite happy with. I am never fond or happy with my work but friends like you keep me going, thanks!

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcome...my pleasure...i know what you mean...
i have writes that i'm like "bleh" and friends seems to think it's not
half bad. will visit again soon after i can capture words *sighs* :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

like the prodigal son...but totally lost. reminds me of society today...heading toward an abyss...purpose numbed, path misguided.

excellent poem, Kee....

not sure why these last pieces have no reviews...that is ridiculous...

more good poetry ignored.

j.

[KeeD]

You interpreted this so well. That is amazing, thank you for your time and your kind review. I know I don't get reviews anymore but it doesn't matter as long as I get one review like this from a friend ^^