Mērī Pyārī Sūrya

मेरी प्यारी सूर्य

Ō' मैं वृद्ध कैसे

मैं अपने आकर्षण खो दिया 

मैं तित को lubhān�" नहीं कर सकते

मेरा पंखुड़ियों बेजान हैं

बारिश मेरे li'�" रोता है

L�"kin आप अभी भी मुझे प्यार करते हो

मेरी प्यारी सूर्य

My beloved sun

O' how I aged

I lost my charm 

I can not entice the butterflies

My petals are lifeless

The rain cries for me

But you still love me

My beloved sun

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what a deep write...much more than just a common sun....we are talking of how we lean towards one we love, one who takes us out of the shadows of pain. The rain cries for me, lets me dwell in the self-pity, but this other person is the sun that gets dry, gets us back to being ourselves.

wonderful write, Kee....and so good to see you again.

j.

[KeeD]

Thank you so much my friend, I've missed you and your motivational reviews. Glad to see you're still here and still going strong with your work, you inspire! much love, kee.

[Zinal]

Waw u touched my heart