Lady of the Sky

Lady of the Sky 

~Moonlight it breaks my heart

For I bid you no farewells yet in time you depart

Lost in the nostalgic night so quiet

Walking amongst the fireflies

I feel my soul at ease

The shifting of pebbles in the street

Through the translucent windowpanes

Your reflection and my eyes meet~

~A beautiful dweller of the night

Lady of the sky who controls the tide

My secrets you've held since I was a child

Conversations about dark transitions of my life

The night will eventually end, I'll lose you, my true friend

If the sun evaporates me completely promise me my moonlit night

We'll meet again somewhere under a blanket of stars

and have our reminiscing talks for hours~

© 2014 Keegan D'souza

Author's Note

picture credit to jcruzrobles

Reviews

[Shweta]

I liked the conversation..few lines really caught me.. like "My secrets you've held since I was a child". It's amazing...I could relate to that state and also the conversation so much. Well done

[workscot]

You've got your pen filled with stardust again.Five honkin heart filled verses,totting your love trails to far flung universes.Your lines do so intricately entwine,comets and cupids with which you dine.Dude,Mumbai is magic for you,stunning write.Keep on equatin what's shaken in your world of wonder.Your friend,workscot

[Mirror]

I don't want to be in a rush... give me hours to undress this beautiful piece and understand the wonders beneath. I will get back to you with a review....

[KeeD]

Haha don't worry about this piece too much my friend, it's just a small blurt of my heart after having a lonely night with the moon keeping me company.

[Mirror]

Ah! How you underestimate the power of small things.....

[Mirror]

But what you say is true, friend. The work is small blurt with perfection in and out... Well done.

[KeeD]

I have no connection to this and Halley, it's just the way the moon made me feel on a lonely day. I don't know if I should rework it to make it connect. Thank you for making me go back to these and actually think about them once more. That's special, you're amazing.

[Mirror]

Sure welcome, anytime, darling. The thing is I read all your work the same time therefore exposing the one character - the universe. It connects. And they are all unique, I tell you.

[Matching Socks]

Adore this Keegan, how many nights I've gazed and wished upon a moon.
Still waiting. Fingers crossed. :)

[KeeD]

Dreams come true, specially when the heart is connected to the wish.. your heart is connected to everything you do Ana. Thank you for the warm review.