Elixir of a Ghost

Elixir of a Ghost

A Chapter by KeeD

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Here I go I'll tell you what you already know 
The snow melts away when summers near
I'm tired of letting you go but I'm okay 
Just a satellite that can't help revolve your way

You're a star in my universe 
One so far away
I'm okay, I'm really not okay
The past spends everyday shining your light my way 

If you look real closely 
You might understand 
I'm not looking for a chance worth living 
On a ground that's done giving

So enjoy existing on that planet of lies
While I continue gazing at the sky 
Some nights are colder than most
Every star, in reality, is a ghost 


© 2017 KeeD


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KeeD
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You're good!!!

This show Helplessness in trying to stop lies from the Halley, to Halley resurrected, to Ronan, now Elixir of a Ghost. You maintain the flow although each chapter can exist on their own.

"So enjoy existing on that planet of lies
While I continue gazing at the sky "

Then you called all stars liars??? :)
Saying they are ghost might as well say they ly too much? :0

"Some nights are colder than most
Every star, in reality, is a ghost "

Good work!!! Well done.



Posted 7 Years Ago



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KeeD
KeeD

Mumbai, India, India



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Hey I'm Kee, I'm 32 and work as a journalist in Mumbai, India. I dabble in writing poetry and do it purely to pump out the creative juices in my being. Thank you for stopping by, live, laugh and love .. more..

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