Halley Resurrected

Halley Resurrected

A Chapter by KeeD

 photo girl_in_space_v_by_sissorelle-d5iro1z_zps484a13b9.jpg

Halley, the sky screams red in your light
Roaring like thunder inflames tonight
If Earths glory ends here alone floating free
I don't think I'll mind if you're the last thing I see

I've heard of your tales from galaxies end
I'd hoped and I'd dreamed that I'd see you again
Solar cries of fume, your combustible disguise
Inferno magnífico to the hearts naked eye

Dreams aren't forgotten, hope carries on
When the blaze dimmers, all life has gone
Cozy under a blanket of the brightest of stars
I'll wait there for you for all of my hours 

If you do ever decide to appear
Resurrect me, set this heart free
It's this that I wanted but never forget 
I'd trade it for you and a moment more yet

 photo girl_in_space_i_by_sissorelle-d5fw17j_zps7263985c.jpg


© 2018 KeeD


Author's Note

KeeD
Picture Credit goes to the artist sissorelle from deviant art

My Review

Would you like to review this Chapter?
Login | Register




Featured Review

The title, Halley resurrected, is the answer to the question of the contradiction of Halley's death in the last chapter titled Halley.

Breakdown of Stanzas:
St. 1 - Obsession "I don't think I'll mind if you're the last thing I see"
St.2 - Praises "I've heard of your tales from galaxies end"
st.3 - Eternal Promise "I'll wait there for you for all of my hours"
St.4 - Eternal Love "I'd trade it for you and a moment more yet"

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

You have a long wait to see Halley's Comet again. Only visible from earth every 75-79 years, so it will be 2061 when it is visible again. Your words are sublime and your chosen music a perfect match. Your description of this wonder as it hurtles through the sky wonderful. There were other layers creeping in here with other meanings. I very much enjoyed the whole experience. Thank you

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


KeeD

6 Years Ago

I'd be 72 years old, something worth growing old for I reckon. :)
Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

Alas, I would be a dust mote by then. Perhaps I would see it from a different perspective:))
The title, Halley resurrected, is the answer to the question of the contradiction of Halley's death in the last chapter titled Halley.

Breakdown of Stanzas:
St. 1 - Obsession "I don't think I'll mind if you're the last thing I see"
St.2 - Praises "I've heard of your tales from galaxies end"
st.3 - Eternal Promise "I'll wait there for you for all of my hours"
St.4 - Eternal Love "I'd trade it for you and a moment more yet"

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed this chapter. Powerful needs and thoughts shared in the words.
"I'd trade it for you and a moment more yet"
I understand the above lines. One more minute with someone you loved. Would be worth a thousand deaths. Thank you Keegan for sharing the amazing chapter.
Coyote



Posted 7 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

233 Views
3 Reviews
Rating
Added on November 20, 2014
Last Updated on July 4, 2018


Author

KeeD
KeeD

Mumbai, India, India



About
Hey I'm Kee, I'm 32 and work as a journalist in Mumbai, India. I dabble in writing poetry and do it purely to pump out the creative juices in my being. Thank you for stopping by, live, laugh and love .. more..

Writing
The Glory The Glory

A Poem by KeeD


Calamities Will Calamities Will

A Poem by KeeD



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..