If Shoes Could Talk

~sorry ladies~

Excuse me, no time to chit chat

Got to go see If I fit that 

High maintenance queen 

with her glutenous feet 

Sew me romantically 

somewhere in the Philippines 

Oh you little child you see

how you'll never have a piece of me

Bursting out the seams

she manipulates herself into me

and now my edges soften 

my body becomes her coffin 

She'll take me to her bed

and look at me all night instead

of the man who paid for me

He sighs for her attention silently 

You materialistic psycho

walking so passionately 

making sure the world can see

 me under your feet, oh you're so sweet

Is your collection complete?

is your collection complete?

is your collection complete?

Author's Note

the music can get a little annoying not to mention graphic, sorry lol but it just fits :P

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Woo, snappy and below the belt, did you write this about me Kee....! Sue me, I love my shoes....

'You materialistic psycho' ;) We all have our poison hon....xoxo

[KeeD]

Haha nah it's not about anyone just inspiration off this silly song.

[Frieda P]

Shoes shoes, omg shoes.... ;P

[ms. barrie]

lol shoes are evil...I detest them, shopping for them. for me
there's nothing like walking bare foot.
wear the same ones for years. that said...very enjoyable, definitely an Lol!
satire. great flow, imagery has a bit of a bite...I enjoyed the
repeating lines at the end, adds cadence.
thanks for the share :)

[KeeD]

Thank you for the review :D haha so shoes really don't excite you? that's awesome although I don't know how much truth it holds :P

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like how the last lines get smaller and smaller, as if he feels his self-worth get smaller and smaller in her eyes...high maintenance--and a user...she runs all the men she knows into the ground with her distant heart.

[KeeD]

Haha exactly, wow jacob it's like you're in my head. Thank you for reviewing this silly poem of mine :P