Life of Sid

Even though the pain pulsates through the meds

life flashes in alternating moments and dreams make sense

spread your wings and fly, I don't believe the greats are meant to say goodbye

Like a beautiful kite you fill up the sky in color with your magnificence 

only the string tying you down to this earthly suffering

believe and seek deliverance, I watch you soar passed the clouds

Loud is your heart that echoes volumes of love 

Pure is your soul like the feathers of a dove 

tuck away that insecurity, disown the negativity 

Behold tomorrow for you're in it, this life you're going to win it!

No one can take that away from you, the sunlight flows through you

Radiate in the rays of your amazing ways 

O'How you brighten up all of our days 

I feel your heart jump out of your skin, cleansing and curing the blood within

we walk this path together, when you feel like you need a brother

look no further I'll carry you to the finish line 

My heart's yours, your heart's mine 

You've healed me and you'll heal you in time

So don't ever give up, you're not a memory I can put behind

you're the present and the future and the world's greatest find

-my friend Sid-

 

Author's Note

for a friend that has to deal with leukemia. I can't take away the pain but i can definitely not let it be the only feeling you feel brother <3

Reviews

[Blacksheepfiction]

this is beautiful and so touching. you are an amazing friend to be about to do this for them. great job and keep up the great work!

[Anand Sehgal]

Awesome emotional write :) I loved every bit of it :) beautiful theme
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[FlatLineBeauty]

This was so beautiful. You're an amazing friend with a big heart, Kee. Xo winter

[KeeD]

Ty amanda. Miss ya. How've you been?

[FlatLineBeauty]

I've been okay. Really busy with work, but I'm always on skype even though it says I'm not there... -whispers- I hide a lot. Lol. I have a lot to post, but my computer is down so for now I've been logging on via iPad. Hmu on skype sometime xo

[chandlerl]

this is such a beautiful poem and I wish your friend all the luck in the world.
This poem radiates love and hope. Pain and suffering that comes with earth held flesh.
Thank you.

[Ayvid N]

"we walk this path together, when you feel like you need a brother

look no further I'll carry you to the finish line "


A very touching tribute. I wish him all the best. God is great. Miracles happen everyday.

[Traci]

First of all let me say Sid is in my thoughts and prayers, dear friend. This is such a lovely tribute, a soulful write, from the depths of your heart and soul. A beautiful one at that. Such compassion, the intensity of pain and helplessness is felt, something I can relate to. As you fight along side your friend, cherish the sweet memories, let the love and light from friends and family give you both strength, and courage to face the days ahead. He's very lucky to have such a loving compassionate friend, as you are truly a blessing in my life as well. Much love sweet friend.

[Ahena MK]

Really really good .... Nicely penned :)
Ahena :)

[Bluefire]

"I feel your heart jump out of your skin, cleansing and curing the blood within"
It was a nice tribute to your friend, though at times it was kind of hard to read.
Well played, anyway. ^^

[KeeD]

hard to read because of the structure, how do I fix it bluefire chan

[Bluefire]

Not really the structure, but the wording near the beginning. Was a little hard to read for me, maybe it's just me or I didn't read it right. ^^

[Baby Ricochet]

A lovely poem to a friend in pain. Good one Keegan

[Lyn Anderson]

A great tribute poem to a beloved friend. The hearts close to the end is heart's