Blood Countess

Crimson colored method of madness

Brilliance in the dwelling of malice 

Glory to the bite of Hungary 

In blood, she reigns, Erzsébet  Báthory

 

O' virgin pure in midnight's caress

The goat of Mendean you please to impress

Mutilation, torture, such is their fate

Erotic sacrifice in the  Báthory estate

 

Daughters of men, chosen to die

Screams encompass the red moon sky

In the shadow of darkness, she remains

Satiating her bloodlust for an immortal name

 

 

Blood Countess 

Blood Countess 

Blood Countess 

Reviews

[Caradoc]

This is a well written, if disturbing, piece. I do like the subject matter, as I have always been fascinated by the story of Countess Bathory. She's been featured or alluded to in many novels and works of fiction. I think you did a good job with this poem, capturing the horror of her tale.

Points for using the alternate spelling. The English version of her name is missing...soul.

Well done.

-Caradoc

[Mirror]

For me, this work is cool. No need to work on it. Pure. Real. Nice flow. and a touch of old fashion poetry... great work dear

[costa siwale]

They're writers who have undeniable talent, you are definitely one. . Incredible

[FlatLineBeauty]

Kee, my dear you have stunned me yet again. Your mind is a beautiful thing and your creativity just blows me away. I love the way you put what you picture in your mind into words. xo Your Winter

[Frieda P]

Holy cats Kee, this is almost as wicked as her lust for bathing in the blood she thirsted ...outstanding my friend! Top shelf stuff........

[KeeD]

Greetings from India, Hey Frieda you really think so, that's awesome cause this didn't quite feel finished to me, I almost never sit on my writes, just post them as soon as I get an idea. Flattering for you to say that, thank you my friend!

[Frieda P]

Oh I think that's the perfect finishing line right there hon, you nailed it!

[ms. barrie]

Omg, Keegan, I have always been fascinated with Erzebet Bathory esp. Since my father's
Side are from Hungary.

No, no do not change a thing! Holy crap, you captured the every essence of this vampire
countess...
Amazingly well! The whole bloodthirsty vanity of Erzebet terrifying all.

This is horrifyingly mesmerizing, Damn!

[KeeD]

Greetings from India, I'm flattered to have you enjoy my warped tales about bloody legends.
-Cynical Method