Sye

I'm a bullet in a loaded gun 

waiting to depart from here

Flying under the radar of the sun

gliding through the stratosphere   

 

The touch of your cooling breeze

Makes me sway like the dancing leaves

The ocean pours into me

all of your humility  

 

and you found me 

somewhere where the sky and earth meet

come hold me 

Cause the horizon isn't far and you're my rising star

Ohhhhh Woahhhh Sye, (Sye Sye)

You lit up the midnight sky

 

Like lanterns on a lake 

You make love arise

I've seen it in your eyes

the spark of a thousand fireflies

 

Sye (Sye Sye)

Ohh, Sye

You lit up the midnight sky

 

Like the moonlight 

making the grains of sand sparkle

The crackle of wood 

As the fire makes it charcoal 

 

All the little things in life

now seem so important

It's all because of you 

You're our rising star

 

and you found me 

somewhere where the sky and earth meet

come hold me 

Cause the horizon isn't far and you're my rising star

Ohhhhh Woahhhh Sye, (Sye Sye)

You lit up the midnight sky

 

Reviews

[s y e]

This is such a cool song, what are you writing a song for all your lovely ladies now. ;-P I loved this Kee - it was lovely! Loved the wording, such a sweet write. :)

[KeeD]

The rest are all figments of my imagination :P

[s y e]

Haha, I'm sure you can use that brain of yours and do the same for others. ;

[s y e]

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[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

and you found me
somewhere where the sky and earth meet
come hold me
Cause the horizon isn't far and you're my rising star -- wow...these are impressive lines.

I felt depth in this one, and the imagey was fantastic. I could imagine this very easy as a song; as a matter of fact I would love to hear it!