Evelynn

Poems of the league

Evelynn, the mirror reflected blue

Misery loves company

Diabolically true

The night is my veil 

My origins become tales

Fanatical vampirism 

 

Shadows beckon the lust

I consume cause I must

Insatiable Thirst 

 

From the darkness 

A seductive temptress

Hunting Man

 

I've got the touch

The bite, the clutch 

Devour souls

 

Evelynn, the mirrored cried black

Mourning the victim of my next attack

I may be bad

but

It feels so good....

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

About a female vampire from the league of legends

Reviews

[Mirror]

hahaha! Tell Evelynn in your art that her poetic definitions are so accurate. I love this,
"The night is my veil
My origins become tales
Fanatical vampirism"

[Carly]

Yessss. I think the final lines of your stanzas are extremely powerful, and leave an impact on the reader. Your writing can stand alone without the different fonts and music, but I think it definitely makes your work more dimensional. You are very skilled with language. Thanks for sharing.

[PossiblyAlice]

Hey you! I really like how you use audio, font and color to help set your tone in your pieces. It really helps to exaggerate the vibrance of your words. As for the context I love how made the vampire so desireable :)

As usual, great work!

[KeeD]

Yeah finding the right kind of font and music for me is important it makes me feel like i'm being more creative etc... kinda become my thing lol

[Mirror]

i totally agree with Alice.

[quinfinn]

i love anything that rings of gothic horror and this exemplifies that very genre. so well written is this, it is almost palpable and exudes a substance of darkness. i have apparently been missing out on some very good prose by not reading your work. i assure you, that is not going to happen again!

[Baby Ricochet]

This reads like a vampire alright. I like the structure. Short and punchy. Like "here's a line; THWAP!" Outstanding work young man.

[AYVID N]

I have always felt something so sinister yet sexy about vampires...Now after reading this poem I know why!

"I've got the touch
The bite, the clutch" - Yes, they do and what more, they feel so good.

The pulse races, the heart paces and the poem has just that touch of mystique and raw sensuality to leave the victim wanting more.

[LostandAlone]

Ooooh, I liked this. So sexy and haunting. Beautifully written.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

"Oh Evelynn"...love, love, love the way that this felt as I read. There is halting, gritty, deep and tangible piece. Great workmanship on this one. Kudos!

[A.E. Surdam]

Sweet poem! Sexy and haunting all rolled into one. The music adds to the wonderful, inviting poetry. I feel as though the voice of the poem is calling for the one who reads to enter. Great write!

[Frieda P]

I don't know who Evelynn is but I wanna be her right now! This is that pain that grinds you to your limits and feels so freaking good! You are master of your domain here Kee....so glad to see you back my sweet fiend! ;-)

[KeeD]

Thank you for the awesome review, Oh trust me she's someone everyone wants to be or be with.. and fools we all are cause we play right into her palm :P

[Frieda P]

Well, I loved it, and the music goes perfectly, good choice. :-)

[KeeD]

Thank you :D I was really considering removing the music cause it might be too long for the short poem and the music gets really good towards the end, haha.

[Frieda P]

Oh god no, it works with this one...I know some people don't like it, but fook em if they can't take a joke. ;-P