Blinded by the sun

poems inspired by songs

You've always tried to be number one

Everyone you know swaying like grass

A whole new level of love, hate and fun 

Cover your face you're blinded by the sun

I don't mean to call you jaded 

But when you treat love like it can be traded

Stop floating on that cloud sweetheart

Dust the dirt from your skirt, you're back down on earth

Making excuses to be better than everyone

Save the manipulation darling 

You're convincing no one

Cover your face you're blinded by the sun

How about you devote that energy

And save your foolish debauchery

You can't seduce your way out of this one

Just pull your panties up and run  

LalaLaLaLaLaLaLa...

Blinded by the sun.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Emily Feret]

oh snap!

Girls think they can get what they want with their..(clear throat) charm...

Well written!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this entire poem is really good...but the fourth stanza by itself is worth the read..."just pull your panties up and run"

"can't seduce your way out of this one"

but sometimes that is the thought...people use their charm of seduction to get what they want, or to get out of bad situations...doesn't always work...some have seen it before.

jacob

[s y e]

Wow, you have some powerful lines here, Kee. I told ya not to stop writing! Dayum boy, keep them coming! :) Glad you're back!