I Scream, I Love, I Write.

My tongue dances behind my lips

To taste your candy coated kiss

sugar drops of heaven 

as my eyes sin with every glimpse

Sweet the sound of your playful laugh

the cheer that consumes my heart

Steering wheel to my soul

Your texture makes my mind lose control 

Cover my heart with melted chocolate 

Taste the caramel peel it's coated with

Red cherries waiting to be picked

Sitting on your chest that's aching to be licked

Gobble you up for premier satisfaction

You and I share a fatal attraction

So fill me up with your kindness

Show me what the good life is

Treat me 

Like

I would 

Treat you

My delicious love

Reviews

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Damn!!!!!! That sounds like fun:) Great description Keegan:)

[KeeD]

:P you like icecream? ^_-

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Yes:) Very mukch so:)

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

I meant much:)

[Rika]

Adorable :3 great write!

[minnie:)]

wow this is pretty good, but your writing changed. to be honest I'm a lot like you. Most people stick to one way of writing but u dnt. i like that.
P.S you should write another :)

[Ohhhwillow]

This is cute, light hearted, fun.. Not like much else I have rad of yours I have to say I am extremely surprised! Every writer years to change and cross a different path at some point though, so fair enough, write how you please until you find the form that best befits you! :)

[ganga ramesh]

great....i love it!!

[KAOlmsted]

God damn it, Kee...this isn't you.

Sorry.

This isn't your voice...I love your voice so god damned much...I recognize this isn't it...PM me if you need to talk...

[KeeD]

I know, i'm sorry I just need to get back into my groove. How've you been?

[KAOlmsted]

Don't apologize, and for Christ's sake, don't post just for the sake of posting...I don't know about anyone else, but I can tell this wasn't you...

I'm okay, except for the missing "KEE" in the door to my soul ;-)

Yeah...I actually said that xD

[KeeD]

Hahah I miss you too, a lot actually.

[KAOlmsted]

xoxo Don't be a stranger (and sorry I was a bit harsh, but, god damn it...) ;-)

[Frieda P]

Man she's tough!! Sometimes you just have to dip a toe in some sugary goodness to test the waters again! Give the kid a break, told you he's been hand feeding me grapes! ;-P

[KAOlmsted]

*laugh* No way...he's way better than this hot saccharine mess ;-) And he knows it...so do you :-p

xoxo (x2)

[Frieda P]

Ha I know, he's just too cute, it's still better than some crap, sometimes ya give the boy a little leeway... You're meaner than a pitbull! ;-P You know that was said with oodles of affection *laugh* mwah! xx

[KAOlmsted]

xD

(It is better than some crap, you got me there.) If he wasn't so damn cute I'd have really torn him an a*s, though ;-)

[Frieda P]

Ha knowing Kee, he'd enjoy it, just saying. ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

xD yeah...

[chaotic katie]

very passionate piece, the words flow well together. great job as usual :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Goddamn it I'm starving now. Cute write Keegan

[N!LoC]

*drool.... (seriously)

[Frieda P]

Confectionery goodness first bite to last...woooo. I am now on a sugar overload high, whirling from your sweet poetry! Nice to see you back sweet stuff!