Matheran

Matheran

A Poem by KeeD
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A poem about a beautiful Indian Hill station.

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Invisible to the naked eye

Hidden amongst the clouds

Magnificent throne of the sky  

Making India proud

 

Fresh streams flow down your cheeks

Like a good old morning cry

Just a poet trying to reach your peak

Meditating in the Indian sky

 

Railway tracks climbing up your spine

In the pursuit of an adventurous climb 

Embracing the sunshine

Experiencing natures prime

 

Wild horses run free

Like a scarf floating in the breeze

The whisper of the Arabian sea

Demands the dancing of the trees

 

Uplift me to the northern gates

Looking heaven in the face

Sitting in your lavish green estate

Never wanting to leave this place


 

I'm home Matheran

 

 

© 2017 KeeD


Author's Note

KeeD
To travel to Matheran you need to park your car below and catch a tram that takes you up the hill. The place is so beautiful, it has wildlife, monkeys, scenery to die for and most of all it's peaceful. You feel at one with the earth, it's like mother nature planted a kiss on the cheek of the mountain and you can feel the after effects of her love.

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I felt the peace here, you took me on an enlightened journey, lulls you into a harmonious state of being with the majesty of that mountain. The music adds to the ambiance of it all...touching upon more than one sense with this read. You've made it so tangible, I can practically breathe the fresh air within your work.

'The wild horses run free
Like a scarf floating in the breeze
The flowers playfully wink at me
As they sway in rhythm to the buzzing bees'

Winking flowers, love it! You are growing as a poet in leaps and bounds my friend...just lovely. Can't say more.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeeD

11 Years Ago

I love the way you said I can breathe the fresh air in your work, wow that touched me, I'm so humble.. read more



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I love this! I wish I were there right now, rather than at work! You definitely use imagery to make this place sound like a paradise. My favorite line is when you compare the horses to a scarf. I could really picture them running through the warm breeze:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Elizabeth Carter

11 Years Ago

I wish!!! Too bad I am practically broke!:(
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KeeD

11 Years Ago

Crap, my flying carpet is out for repairs or i'd totally come get you :P
I felt the peace here, you took me on an enlightened journey, lulls you into a harmonious state of being with the majesty of that mountain. The music adds to the ambiance of it all...touching upon more than one sense with this read. You've made it so tangible, I can practically breathe the fresh air within your work.

'The wild horses run free
Like a scarf floating in the breeze
The flowers playfully wink at me
As they sway in rhythm to the buzzing bees'

Winking flowers, love it! You are growing as a poet in leaps and bounds my friend...just lovely. Can't say more.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeeD

11 Years Ago

I love the way you said I can breathe the fresh air in your work, wow that touched me, I'm so humble.. read more
Ahhhh, what a calming place that seems to me! Made me wanna go! Your nature and the oblivion poetry are always good!

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Thank you JS, come visit, we'll definitely go and maybe you can come up with some funny stories of o.. read more
Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

That's in india right? We'll see :))
Wow, you have a lot of imagination! I think you are a good writer. =)

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much :3 have an amazing 2013!
Tavionna

11 Years Ago

You too, and your welcome=)
nicely and greatly described the beauty of nature of hill station...keep writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
This is such a beautiful poem. I especially love the ending, I feel it pieces it together wonderfully and really sums up this beautiful place called Matheran. Nicely done. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Hey Kelsey thank you :D When you get the chance to go on an adventure maybe India could be a good sp.. read more
Your words are so eloquently portrayed the beauty, serenity of this place: "Matheran" -- i love the imagery, you depicted in this poem, the fluidity like that of a dance. You are fortunate to live in/near such a place. great job, Keegan. Pen on :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Wow thank you so much for. It's a beautiful place and you should come visit sometime :)
ms. barrie

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome, Keegan, it was a pleasure to read. I love mountains because the same exact imag.. read more
your poem makes it so, enhances the beauty of the place...

although the picture made me a bit woozy...i have such a fear of heights...but love your poetry...

really nice work.



Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

I apologize Jacob, I didn't take that into consideration.. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem though :)
jacob erin-cilberto

11 Years Ago

oh no.....it's a beautiful photograph; i am just a wuss.
This is beautiful Kee, I love it. It looks like such a wonderful place to visit. Amazing work as always Kee!
~Tasha

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Thank you Tasha :3 India is amazing in both the western and the eastern sense of lifestyle.. Truly d.. read more
 Tasha

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome. The pleasure was all mine :3 I would love to visit India...it truly looks amazi.. read more
Wow...that is absolutely incredible...and the poem is so in sync with the spirit of the area...I'm awestruck :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

coming from you that's truly a compliment sir! You think there is anything I need to fix?
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

I think it's just fine my friend :)

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KeeD
KeeD

Mumbai, India, India



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Hey I'm Kee, I'm 32 and work as a journalist in Mumbai, India. I dabble in writing poetry and do it purely to pump out the creative juices in my being. Thank you for stopping by, live, laugh and love .. more..

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