To travel to Matheran you need to park your car below and catch a tram that takes you up the hill. The place is so beautiful, it has wildlife, monkeys, scenery to die for and most of all it's peaceful. You feel at one with the earth, it's like mother nature planted a kiss on the cheek of the mountain and you can feel the after effects of her love.
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I felt the peace here, you took me on an enlightened journey, lulls you into a harmonious state of being with the majesty of that mountain. The music adds to the ambiance of it all...touching upon more than one sense with this read. You've made it so tangible, I can practically breathe the fresh air within your work.
'The wild horses run free
Like a scarf floating in the breeze
The flowers playfully wink at me
As they sway in rhythm to the buzzing bees'
Winking flowers, love it! You are growing as a poet in leaps and bounds my friend...just lovely. Can't say more.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
I love the way you said I can breathe the fresh air in your work, wow that touched me, I'm so humble.. read moreI love the way you said I can breathe the fresh air in your work, wow that touched me, I'm so humbled to have someone as talented and experienced as you review my work and compliment it. Just pull an eat pray love and come down to India already :D
I love this! I wish I were there right now, rather than at work! You definitely use imagery to make this place sound like a paradise. My favorite line is when you compare the horses to a scarf. I could really picture them running through the warm breeze:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Catch the next flight, i'll get your horse ready and everything!
I felt the peace here, you took me on an enlightened journey, lulls you into a harmonious state of being with the majesty of that mountain. The music adds to the ambiance of it all...touching upon more than one sense with this read. You've made it so tangible, I can practically breathe the fresh air within your work.
'The wild horses run free
Like a scarf floating in the breeze
The flowers playfully wink at me
As they sway in rhythm to the buzzing bees'
Winking flowers, love it! You are growing as a poet in leaps and bounds my friend...just lovely. Can't say more.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
I love the way you said I can breathe the fresh air in your work, wow that touched me, I'm so humble.. read moreI love the way you said I can breathe the fresh air in your work, wow that touched me, I'm so humbled to have someone as talented and experienced as you review my work and compliment it. Just pull an eat pray love and come down to India already :D
Ahhhh, what a calming place that seems to me! Made me wanna go! Your nature and the oblivion poetry are always good!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you JS, come visit, we'll definitely go and maybe you can come up with some funny stories of o.. read moreThank you JS, come visit, we'll definitely go and maybe you can come up with some funny stories of our journey .
This is such a beautiful poem. I especially love the ending, I feel it pieces it together wonderfully and really sums up this beautiful place called Matheran. Nicely done. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Hey Kelsey thank you :D When you get the chance to go on an adventure maybe India could be a good sp.. read moreHey Kelsey thank you :D When you get the chance to go on an adventure maybe India could be a good spot to hit :) pen on my friend!
Your words are so eloquently portrayed the beauty, serenity of this place: "Matheran" -- i love the imagery, you depicted in this poem, the fluidity like that of a dance. You are fortunate to live in/near such a place. great job, Keegan. Pen on :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Wow thank you so much for. It's a beautiful place and you should come visit sometime :)
11 Years Ago
You're very welcome, Keegan, it was a pleasure to read. I love mountains because the same exact imag.. read moreYou're very welcome, Keegan, it was a pleasure to read. I love mountains because the same exact imagery, emotions you conveyed in this poem. BTW: love the accompanying music to go along with this song, and the different colored fonts, you used, matching the image of this place. Would love to, perhaps one day i will, see what unfolds - Pen on :)
This is beautiful Kee, I love it. It looks like such a wonderful place to visit. Amazing work as always Kee!
~Tasha
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you Tasha :3 India is amazing in both the western and the eastern sense of lifestyle.. Truly d.. read moreThank you Tasha :3 India is amazing in both the western and the eastern sense of lifestyle.. Truly diverse
11 Years Ago
You're very welcome. The pleasure was all mine :3 I would love to visit India...it truly looks amazi.. read moreYou're very welcome. The pleasure was all mine :3 I would love to visit India...it truly looks amazing
Hey I'm Kee, I'm 32 and work as a journalist in Mumbai, India. I dabble in writing poetry and do it purely to pump out the creative juices in my being. Thank you for stopping by, live, laugh and love .. more..