Matheran

Matheran

A Poem by KeeD
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A poem about a beautiful Indian Hill station.

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Invisible to the naked eye

Hidden amongst the clouds

Magnificent throne of the sky  

Making India proud

 

Fresh streams flow down your cheeks

Like a good old morning cry

Just a poet trying to reach your peak

Meditating in the Indian sky

 

Railway tracks climbing up your spine

In the pursuit of an adventurous climb 

Embracing the sunshine

Experiencing natures prime

 

Wild horses run free

Like a scarf floating in the breeze

The whisper of the Arabian sea

Demands the dancing of the trees

 

Uplift me to the northern gates

Looking heaven in the face

Sitting in your lavish green estate

Never wanting to leave this place


 

I'm home Matheran

 

 

© 2017 KeeD


Author's Note

KeeD
To travel to Matheran you need to park your car below and catch a tram that takes you up the hill. The place is so beautiful, it has wildlife, monkeys, scenery to die for and most of all it's peaceful. You feel at one with the earth, it's like mother nature planted a kiss on the cheek of the mountain and you can feel the after effects of her love.

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I felt the peace here, you took me on an enlightened journey, lulls you into a harmonious state of being with the majesty of that mountain. The music adds to the ambiance of it all...touching upon more than one sense with this read. You've made it so tangible, I can practically breathe the fresh air within your work.

'The wild horses run free
Like a scarf floating in the breeze
The flowers playfully wink at me
As they sway in rhythm to the buzzing bees'

Winking flowers, love it! You are growing as a poet in leaps and bounds my friend...just lovely. Can't say more.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeeD

11 Years Ago

I love the way you said I can breathe the fresh air in your work, wow that touched me, I'm so humble.. read more



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BL
Wow this place sounds amazing, very peaceful and uplifting spiritually as well as physically

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

thank you
I wonder if you really could reach Heaven from those hills? The way you described it I truly believe it :) you have a wonderful gift with adjectives, you paint a dazzling picture with words. I'll have to add this place to my list of traveling destinations. Well done Kee, from the picture to your words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Lmao for sure :P haha if you drop me down you're treating me to ice cream though, cause I get cranky.. read more
Serenity Faith

11 Years Ago

*gasps* I would never drop Kee! And if I did I'd kiss your boo boo and make it better ^_^ I learned .. read more
KeeD

11 Years Ago

Hahaha what a boss! well get your cute wittle butt over here soon, let's ride!
Absolutely beautiful the picture itself puts you in such a calm place , your words drive that feeling of serenity home. Zen like lovely

Posted 11 Years Ago


Your piece is one of pure enlightenment. Your use of specific diction, structure, parallelism, irony and symbolism encourages me to begin a journey of self-discovery. Diction and structure are the foundation of any literary work. And you seem to have these two down packed Keegan. Your word choices create a mysterious spiritual atmosphere in which I seek to obtain inner-peace. Thanks for sharing :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sounds like a lovely place that is very peaceful and close to heaven another beautiful write Kee.

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

I was inspired by one of the first poems I read by you called Fragments of Light a long time ago and.. read more
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Oh wow thank you so much. :)
This has almost a peaceful feel to it.. Lovely imagery, wonderfully done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Kee,

Eoloquent poetic literature. Vivid potrayal of "the forest on a forehead." Superb composition and execution of theme. You tickle all my senses. Love it.

May I make a copy for my personal use?

Thank you for sharing this emerald; it's a genuine jewel.

Sincerely,

Cecil

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Cecil, You certainly can, it's very flattering for a brilliant writer like yoursel.. read more
smart move on the song

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Thank you
when i read this i could actually picture myself here, the music and imagery contributed to that, but the peice flows well together on its on aswell. Its the kind of peice that has the capeability to take you on a journey, an escape. You have truely created a work of art, i enjoyed reading.

Posted 11 Years Ago


KeeD

11 Years Ago

Thank you Katie :D
chaotic katie

11 Years Ago

no problem!

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KeeD
KeeD

Mumbai, India, India



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Hey I'm Kee, I'm 32 and work as a journalist in Mumbai, India. I dabble in writing poetry and do it purely to pump out the creative juices in my being. Thank you for stopping by, live, laugh and love .. more..

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